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Menggmongg #1
Chapter 2: i knew i read this bfore but cant remmber the details. this seem like another amazingly written supernatural au im so exciteddd why cant i rmember about this story bforeeee its in my subsribe so i should alr read it rightttt
noelle0719
#2
Chapter 2: I really miss your story and am a big fan of your writing
Lovelyyzz
67 streak #3
Chapter 2: Great start, we have a clueless but sassy girl, a complete two-faced fake girl, a group of idiots "in love" or not (who knows?), a moody reader (I want to slap Byul XD) and a father who hasn't appeared *sigh*
Thanks for updating ^^
adelaraloera #4
Chapter 2: Byul is so toxic and most of Linas suffering is because of her! I feel like she only stays cuz she’s her only friend.
davian
#5
Chapter 2: Lina is so damn hot
I love her style, she is beyond amazing here and I notice that in this new write up she is more uptight and protective of byul than the previous one likr the phone breaking scene
davian
#6
Chapter 2: Lina is so damn hot
I love her style, she is beyond amazing here and I notice that in this new write up she is more uptight and protective of byul than the previous one likr the phone breaking scene
JadeKKeyLoveYOU
#7
Chapter 2: Aaaaaaaah i already like iiiit (again).
The scene with kyungsoo i vaguely remember, the other not. Band damn, byul's more sneaky here, i think.
Good chapter, can't wait to read more!
Akvjwkdf fighting dear! ♥
NoraMyFics #8
Chapter 2: You could clearly see what Byul did here!! that freaking two faced thing!! Getting the energy from Lina so that boys would feel it from her instead of Lina!!
Fireflies123 #9
Chapter 2: Oop Lina finally met the boys and I’m already feeling hostility from both sides. Do they know she has their powers yet? Most likely I assume. I can’t wait to see how Lina's relationship with Byul's 'boys' will come to play out. I’m so intrigued already.

Thank you for the update. Stay safe.
Alosya #10
omg long time no see
CezzaC #11
Chapter 1: YAaaaaassssssssss!!! This was my fave fic back in the day and to see it getting a revamp makes me so happy?? I am HERE for all the changes you mentioned would be coming (hello emotional growth anyone? Also the prospect of fluff in the future? yes) and as I've pretty much forgotten the plot (oops) I am reading this like the first time~
First chapter is great - I remember liking your writing style before but this is a joy to read - and the potential for soooo much character development is nice - Byul doesn't quite as bad as I remember but is still realistic, and Jimmy can bog off. Also nice to see a hint of exo so early without disrupting the worldbuilding, keep it up! xx
NoraMyFics #12
Chapter 1: I was checking out things in my account these days and I came across this!! Nice to see the update! It's fine even if you are doing it again!! And that byul! She isn't friend, especially when she is being selfish and inconsiderate all the time. Poor Lina. Thanks for the update! Looking forward to this version even though I don't remember much about previous version anymore, hehe.
Sooyong #13
Chapter 1: Yeay.. Update!! Plus, the 1st chapter alreadt this goofd!!
Akansha_77 #14
Chapter 1: Byul is such a toxic friend... I feel sad for Lina
Meggiemooautumn
#15
Chapter 1: This used to be one of my favourite stories on this site and i'm so happy you are editing the story, i look forward to the changes and falling in love with lina all over again!
Meggiemooautumn
#16
Chapter 1: This used to be one of my favourite stories on this site and i'm so happy you are editing the story, i look forward to the changes and falling in love with lina all over again!
AiiSoo #17
Chapter 1: Well, Byul is still an annoying little girl that she is. And remembering Lina’s family treatments towards Lina made my heart ached. I don’t really remember much about her father though..? At least she has someone on her side.
Thank you for this 1st chapter. I’ll anticipate how the story will progress..!
AiiSoo #18
Thank you! Thank you, thank you for writing this story again. Eventhough Paper Thin was not yet completed when you decided to stop writing it, it is one of my favorite story of all time on AFF. So thank you again for making the decision to re-write this. I’m going to enjoy reading updates of this story to the very bits...!
parkminjeen
#19
Chapter 1: I got a flashback on how the story goes during this chapter and I’m getting myself ready for some angst huhuhu I also have this like and dislike thing about Byul during this chapter, even from before >:(
RachelHoon #20
Chapter 1: THANK YOU SO MUCH I really didn’t expect this update, much less a revamped version! I have been a fan of this story since its early chapters, seeing it come back again with an upgraded Lina is absolutely amazing omg

I never really liked Byul before, and I can safely say that I dislike her even more now. But I did like how she was portrayed- she doesn’t mean harm, but she’s rather selfish and thoughtless. There’s many people like her in the world today. And definitely I can see how Lina is abit more mature, and in fact I like this version of Lina. She seems stronger and smarter in the way she speaks up for herself and deals with matters, can’t wait for her interaction with EXO!

I enjoyed the story a lot the first round and I’m really looking forward to see how the characters develop further in this revamped version! Thanks so much for your hard work!