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KimKeira
#1
I want an update soon!
I'm so curious!!!
Akira-chan
#2
Read the first chapters and the lines seemed familiar. Are you perhaps a fan of criminal minds? :D
natseon #3
No waaaaayy!!! He can't be die!! *scream out and cry in frustation* okay i'm too much -_- but hey, when the lady said "you weren't suppose to be in here for more 66years" , i feel like 'stabbed'....i wish it's not for real though i know this is just a story but seriously, i wish taemin oppa have MORE LONGER time to enjoy his live ;__; nice story~update yooo~ :)
DaisyDen
#4
awh, please update soon~ :3 i really like this fanfic^^ but i hope taemin doesnt die :<
Jinkis-Sarang
#5
update soon. please dont let taemin die
sonwolforlife
#6
-continuation-
Taemin soon lost consciousness and passed out.
"Our Taemin baby survived! !!" Key said with total joy to the other SHINee members when they got to the hospital. They couldn't believe it. How can someone who hadn't breathed for 20minutes--or maybe more survive? It was a total miracle to them. Minho was so happy that he kneeled down cried.
"How's Taemin?" Key asked nervously at the doctor when he came out.
"He's fine now, but currently he's in sleep, but he needs to be observed for at least a week since he stopped breathing for quite a long time. He passed out due to lack of oxygen and he wasn't given enough time to get more oxygen thus he stopped. In these kind of circumstances he shouldn't live, but it is a miracle that he actually survived, so we need to give him more checkups to prevent him from having a relapse. You can go in and see him now" the doctor gave a long speech, but they absorbed every single word he said.
Key rushed into the ward, and just to see Taemin lying on the bed. Key put his hand over Taemin's nose the check that it was real. Really, Taemin was breathing. Key cried tears of joy. Minho attempted to hug Taemin, but was stopped by Onew, just in case he hurts Taemin.
"Ughhh... where am I... Key umma, Minho hyung, Onew hyung... Where am I..." Taemin mumbled, after sleeping for two days.
"You're in the hospital Taemin..." Minho said, stifling a tear. Jonghyun was there, after recovering at home for a day.
"Woohoo~ our Taemin is backkkk~~~" Jonghyun exclaimed, bringing laughter to the ward.
Minho and Taemin looked at each other and smiled. Taemin turned pink and soon...
---> u can imagine what happened~♥
LOL :P @author-shii if u got offended by me ending it... sry!!! :P
sonwolforlife
#7
RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN >< TAEMINNIE U CANT DIE :O
Well, nobody is updating this chapter :O so lemme just randomly think of sth :P
Taemin ran and ran for his life. It seemed as if it was years before he was able to reach the tunnel, but it was closing. Taemin ran all his might to enter the tunnel, at last managing to slide in his finger before it totally shuts. He was in a dark tunnel, and he shudder at the thought of the bad memories. It was different this time. He could see a small thread of light at the end of the tunnel shining into the place.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Taemin was lying on the bed in the ambulance. Key grabbed the now cold hands of Taemin and shivering uncontrollably. Tears once again filled his eyes, seeing Taemin's lips turn from red to pale pink.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Taemin ran and ran to the light source. He wanted to get out of the doomsplace as fast as possible. Taemin felt faint as he went closer to the light. The light was warm, but it didn't feel like sunlight. It felt like a power to bring everything to life--even the dead.
"I need you...!" Taemin thought in his brain, giving him the bigger urge to get out.
The light was blinding. Taemin managed to walk out of the tunnel, only to see light. Light. Nothing else. Staring at the light, Taemin felt hot and faint. He tried to walk to the light, trying to catch a glimpse of what is it, but before he even reached, Taemin collapsed onto the floor. He thought he was about to faint, but he suddenly heard a familiar voice.
"Taemin!!! Wake up!!! Don't leave us!!!"
It was Key umma, he wanted to see if he was there for him, but his world soon turned into empty blackness.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Uhh... what's happening..." Taemin mumbled, eyes slowly opening.
"OH MY GOD!!! TAEMIN-AH!!! YOU...YOU..."Key cried, as tears slid down his cheeks. They were in the hospital, on their way to the emergency.
Taemin entered into the emergency on the bed. Great. He was breathing again, his heart was beating again, but his body was too weak.
kolmilyo #8
run taemin, ruuuuuuuuuuuuun!
heartbrokenghurl
#9
pls update soon
XxBlowingxBubblesxX
#10
Please update soon! This is super super super interesting! Saranghae <3~

-Bubbles
kurisuchina93
#11
RUN TAEMIN RUN!!!!!!! T.T
alejojaz000
#12
TAEMIN RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DazzlingTaemint
#13
RUN TAEMIN RUN!!!!!!!!
MiyaChan
#14
omo, Taemin-ah! Run! T___T
smilyalexa #15
taemin come back !!!!!!!!
alejojaz000
#16
NO TAEMIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'(
SongJeYoo
#17
Don't Kill Anyone, give them a happy ending !!!!!!!
DazzlingTaemint
#18
can no one die or get hurt??? T.T happy ending please?
ftshinebang #19
Don't kill Taemin!!! Or any of Shinee
kolmilyo #20
no one can escape minho if he wishes not.
not even you LEE TAEMIN!