Chapter 6: I likz your story but the fact that’s a remake of one’s CEIMINAL MINDS épisode bugs me a little bc... Well, I know how it will be aftzr lmao !
But apart it, It’s good to see an other type of 2min fanfic
Chapter 6: OMO THIS IS A CRIMINAL MINDS EPISODE! ARE YOU A FAN????????????? I AM A HUGE FAN AND THIS IS A CRIMINAL MINDS EPISODE, NEARLY DOWN TO THE TEE! THE ONE WHERE THE CAPTER TAKES TWO CHILDREN, A BROTHER AND SISTER, AND THE SISTER IS TOLD TO RUN BY HER BROTHER AFTER THE CAPTER HIM AND THE GIRL DOES, THEN ONCE THAT HAPPENS, THE LITTLE GIRL IS REUNITED WITH HER FAMILY WHILE THE BOY IS USED TO GET PILLS, WHERE HE BASICALLY BEGINS TO FIGHT BACK AND OMO OMO I LOVE IT AND OMO IT'S CRIMINAL MINDS MY FAV SHOW ON THE PLANNET IN THE GALAXY AND OMO THANK YOU
Chapter 16: That gif was perfect and Jongkey is just SOOO adorable *0*. I really liked the plot and the storyline but I thought the writing was a bit off :P. but that's ok XD
Chapter 16: What you did there. I see it. That is one of my favorite episodes XD I've noticed you do this before in your writing, it's an interesting choice. Good story.
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