Chapter 59: It's your story. You are the one behind every idea, every moment, every word, why should you change the way you see the development of the story because of others. I understand that you want the story to satisfy your readers but readers choose to read your story because they liked your idea in the first place.
I've seen the other note you wrote before, but it got deleted before I got the chance to comment. While reading your story there were many moments in which I was angry, I got frustrated, I even wondered why is this happening again?!! But despite all this I returned every time you updated the story, I have even waited for your update because those dramatic moments which you are very GOOD at writing, make your story different from others.
I wrote nearly a chapter XD What I wanted to say from all this, is that you should not ask us how long should the story be, just do it the way you want it. And I really like your story !!
Chapter 59: I'm glad that they are together and I just want to say do what your heart tells you if you want drama let their be drama, if you want to end the story end it on your terms, and I didn't feel like ch 58 was bad I liked everything about it. :)
Chapter 59: This is just my opinion, I think you should write the other chapters since nana needs to be explained and exorcist out the story. Chapter 58 was not bad I expected them to get back together and old girl needed to put on her big girl and go after what she wanted. And you forgetting one thing about writing, it's a fictional story and can be told anyway you like it so I think you should push on since you have to answer my questions about nana **winks***
Chapter 57: I'm not sure if I want to slap nana or beat that ... like one minute she is koo then the next, she a two face?? Jesus!! And I'm tired of jiyong like if he tryna get EMI back he need to get his together cuz the he doing now ain't helping him. Ughhh they both stupid... they just need to sit down together and talk it out. And after talking it out they could do w.e they want to each other cuz both of them is causing a heartbreak for themselves
Chapter 57: I'm not sure what to do with Nana. One minute she seems ok then the next minute i want to punch her in the face. Yah! I'm confused like this is my relationship! Good job and thks for the update.
Chapter 57: Today I wasn't feeling well at all, but reading this made me feel a bit better. Also I honestly want all of these misunderstandings to finally clear up and for GD to just say the truth and nothing but that. I'm talking about the girls he slept with too. It might just make or break whatever's left of this relationship.
Chapter 56: Omg!!! I swear everytime you update your story you surprise me all the time.. I can't wait for the next chapter and see there reactions gonna be.
Chapter 53: I just felt myself starting to feel this little pinch of hate for nana with that last phrase.. but I'll control myself for now... can't wait!
Chapter 54: Been a silent reader all this while but I felt I needed to write in response to your note above. Even though English may not be your first language you have spun a cohesive tale that draws me to check your story for updates daily. Really appreciate the effort you make authornim. Keep up the good work ! EMI and Ji Yong are one of the most compelling couple I have read in fan fiction for a while. Rooting for them to work things out !
Chapter 54: Oh also you're welcome I like leaving comments especially in stories where authors don't mind receiving a bit of criticism. Sorry if I was ever harsh on your story. Either way I still think you should be a writer for a drama or something cuz you're that good. Oh wait you know even if they don't end up together one thing I do want is for them to talk to each other for once. Although if they do end up together one things for sure love is never easy their will be obstacles, misunderstandings and a lot of other things but when you finally have a balance then that love will continue to grow.
Chapter 54: English isn't your first language? Whoa girl you have got to be lying. As for the story I well read it and see how it ends and if I'll like it. Ehh why wait I love the story I might not agree with some stuff but I do genuinely love this story. Also you have a nack for making my heart break and then not and then break all over again haha :) keep it up though can't wait to read more.
Chapter 52: I'm so sad I wish things didn't have to end like this I wish they can just talk I'm tired of emi always being in the dark first it was gahi with her sons DNA news the it's so hyun and Diego being total s like why won't they let the two who lost their kid grieve together it's so heartbreaking :(
Chapter 49: Omg I honestly can't wait for the next chapter.... I know they both love each other, why can't they just confess and that'll be it... hopefully she think about the game carefully..
Chapter 49: So i read the comments and I'm like are you kidding me ? She hurt Jiyong just as bad if not worse. Anyway i hope she goes to the police and not keep this a secret or at least tell papa YG like gah please don't do something stupid again.
Chapter 48: Omg he such a !! He know he can't live without her and he wanna act like a .... now I just feel sorry for her. Update soon though, cuz even though he is a I still love this story.
Chapter 48: Honestly if they could just REALLY talk I think things could be better. I'm not sure if they would love each other but at least they wouldn't be jerks to each other. Yes. Both are jerks. In anyway I love your update and can't wait for the next. :)
Chapter 47: *gasp * omg!!! There getting married and they didn't even know. Omg I'm soo excited for the next chapter. Please please please update soon.
Chapter 44: why do i feel like the paternity result is a false result ? omygooooddd please let jiyong be the father ... aigooo my heart is hurting for him
Chapter 44: Author- nim what are you doing to me? My heart was just starting to accept the fact that GD wasn't the father and now you're breaking my heart all over again :( is the baby really GD's.
Chapter 43: Hope the result all negative its not GDs or KSH because she manipulated the test..so none can claim the baby is theirs.
I want her to move on and care for the child without a dad...hahaha love your story..don't mind me,
Chapter 43: Chapter 43: I am truly hurt... all those time they spent together and had and the baby can't even be his... one time with Soo Hyun And she gets pregnant. I'm not gonna believe it. I bet she only did it to keep jiyong out of her life. Imma just tell myself that, that baby Is jiyongs.. this chapter is one of the sadest one I ever read tbh. I almost cried when he found out.. this is some sad ... I hope for the following chaptersss it's good vibes. Update soon.
Chapter 43: Gosh why????? Just why??? I want it to be a lie, I want it so badly to not be true. Why must the baby be Soo Hyun's? After he was so manipulating, he doesn't deserve a happy ending, he deserves to feel the pain that he has caused my GD. Gosh I'm so in my feels right now. Gah I don't want my ship to sink :'(
Chapter 42: The reason you hate her GD is because you sincerely loved her that's why it hurts so much. After reading this I kinda want the baby not to be his, but if it is his I want him to at least hear her out. If he decides to still not end up with her than ok. Gosh I still wish they'll end up together though. One other thing Author-nun you really do your research on this don't you? I mean with articles about GD and all this I'm convinced that you should write a drama or something.
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