Chapter 7: this chapter was fun! taekai pillow fight is so cute. I also love sehun in this story. esp when he was making fun of kai's voice lol. there is just one small mistake in “The music is way too loud, the neighbors might here," it should be hear not here. other than that i didnt see any other mistakes. I really liked this chapter and i can't wait for more!
Chapter 6: Nooo majinkiiiii!!!! Wae???!!!!!!! Damnit that was the closest thing to their first skinship and I was bubbly and smiling like an idiot and jinki came and....nooooo!!!!!
Chapter 6: Man, the moment was great and all..way to ruin their time jinki..well done!
I see the fic progressing a lil, taemin is still hesitating but the way he acted tells me that he likes jongin too.hes just playin safe, didnt he? So cute..i want moar..jkjk...nice update ^-^
Chapter 3: TaeKai Are So Happy When They're Together I Love It I Mean They'll Be The Sweetest Cutest Funniest Adorable Fun Loving & Caring Couple Ever:DYay!TaeKai All The Way:D
Chapter 2: Such an interesting beginning, I can picture everything you describe. I love the characterization you gave so far.
Anticipating the next chapter ♡
Chapter 2: that mr bernard guy needs a smack in the face. I'm glad jongin was there to save taemin. also taemin and jongin are so cute. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship grows!!! Please keep updating!!!! I'm also gonna up vote this! I can already tell its gonna be amazing!
Chapter 2: I'm Enjoying This Even More Now I Like Kai Save Taemin From The Horrible Man.It's The Sweetest Cutest Caring Loving & Adorable Thing Ever I Can't Wait To See What Happens Next Between Kai & Taemin:D
Chapter 1: I Enjoy Reading This Story It's The Sweetest Cutest Coolest Adorable & Fun Ever I Can't Wait To See What Happens Between TaeKai When They Meet Each Other Again:DYay!TaeKai I Love It:D
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