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goojayhee #1
Chapter 7: Sitting down covered in my blanket listening to the rain hitting on my bedroom window with my cup of hot chocolate in my hand while reading your story, it feels the same when I read one of my fantasy books.

So it begins, huh?!
The drama though... Why my heart pounding like that?! So jongin kiss kyungsoo but after he says/thinks he's not gay, what does that mean? What's going to happen next? ㅠ.ㅠ

WHY???? Why would you leave me hanging like that?! ㅠ.ㅠ

You're probably sick of hearing those sentences by know but girl your story is amazing and I love it! Fighting for your next update, can't wait^^
springjasmine91
#2
Chapter 7: it has begun....oh this going to get interesting. fighting
goojayhee #3
Chapter 6: This so sweet and cute at the same time.
Can they just get married already?!
With each update your making this story more and more interesting.
I just noticed that I haven't subscribed to the story yet how the hell I didn't notice this before???
Deleting it??? Have you gone insane? Are you planning on braking my heart?! If you ever think or talk about deleting this story again am going to search for you and hunt you down, you got me hooked up on this fic it's lovely, sweet and at the same time it's so mysterious so don't you ever think about deleting it honey 'cause this story amazing and I love it. So don't you ever say that again honey!
Well... Can't wait to find out what's goinna happen in the next chapter, can't wait^^
infinitaehyung
#4
Chapter 6: ok i really ship taeminxjunmyeon now CAN IT HAPPEN PLS :D
i am also shipping kaisoo so hard here alr aiuekjghaew feelsSSssSs
can they all just get married and overthrow the king that would be a dream come true thank :))
THIS!! STORY!! GETTING!! SO!! INTERESTING!!
i love it so much ok dont even think abt deleting pls mom i will cRY
springjasmine91
#5
Chapter 6: Goodness....Fighting for the next chapter
goojayhee #6
Chapter 5: i feel sorry for taemin... I just hope he'll end up happy!
And woooohoooo kyungsoo is here!!! It so strange the fact that kyungsoo doesn't talk to them, it's so strange I wonder why?!
Ugggh so many questions yet no answers
Great fic darling :) Hope you will keep updating at this peace because when you put a new chapter I still remember what happened in the previous one and I love that!

Thanks for the update honey and can't wait for the next one ^^
springjasmine91
#7
Chapter 5: I can see where this is going.....Fighting for the next chapter!
infinitaehyung
#8
Chapter 5: hnnn taemin's crush on junmyeon is making me sad ;_;
but omg kyungsoo finally yAAASS
i dont get it tho why doesnt jongin wanna tell taemin about his meeting with soo??
THANKS FOR THE UDPATE BAE <3
goojayhee #9
Chapter 4: Ohooooo he went deeper into the sea!
I do bet soo is the younger brother am I right?!
I wonder why the said younger brother doesn't show up that much or the reason the know so little about him????
Hmmmmm I guess I'll have to wait to find out oh well, please update soon i love this fic~
sunna_freya
#10
Chapter 4: I can't wait i want Kaisoo soon!!! *pouts* I was sure Kyungsoo was a Mer!!! Is he the youngest son right??
So far i'm loving your story!!! Fighting Author-nim^^
himalui #11
Chapter 4: YAAAS i can feel jongin's going to meet kyungsoo soon! I bet he's the younger son! Pleeeeaaaase update soon!
Beybey77 #12
Chapter 4: I finally got to read chapters 3 and 4, and now I'm excited! He's finally entered their world which means only one thing: LET THE SHIPS BEGIN! Lol
But seriously, I really like your world-building. I was a bit thrown off by how quickly Jongin was able to adapt to the sea, but I hope you explain it further in future chapters, like something in his Sea lineage is unique. I'm also curious about the Merpeople and Junmyeon's reaction to Jongin and why it seems a bit mild. Have a few humans been down there before throughout Mer history and that's its just been a very long time since the Merpeople have seen a human with Sea in his blood? Or maybe the Merpeople are just chill like that and wouldn't be up in arms like humans. Lol Sorry for all the questions. You can ignore me if you want and just answer the questions through progression of the story. But great fic and keep up the good work!
springjasmine91
#13
Chapter 4: Risky....very risky.....I wonder.....Fighting for the next chapter
minnit
#14
I am excited to read this fic
infinitaehyung
#15
Chapter 4: I BET SOO IS THE LAST CHILD AND THEN HE'LL MARRY JONGIN AND THE KING WILL BE FORCED TO LIKE HUMANS AND THEN HAPPILY EVER AFTER YES YES YES
or is this angst are you going to rip my heart out the same way you did in not otherwise specified iF SO LET ME PREPARE MYSELF
taemin and his crush on junmyeon tho NYEHEHEHEHE
but omg jognog pls hv a good excuse i want more underwater adventures from you
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE <3
goojayhee #16
Chapter 3: Sorry for the late comment, I had a big problem with the wi-fi. Stupid wi-fi!
So I already told this girl, you're doing really good job at writing this, you are making fall in love with it more and more each time you update a new chapter. And that's a no lie hon.
Now about the chapter, if jongin want to go deeper into the sea he needs to spend more time under the water, did i get it right?
And sehun though, LOL.... He'll make him believe he's crazy for real!

I wonder when will kyungsoo shows up?!

Why do I have a feeling like this is going to have a sad ending? PLEASE TELL I'M WRONG!

Update soon~
infinitaehyung
#17
Chapter 3: SEHUUUUUN Y U DO DIS
herp derp is soo a mer-person (?) this story is going to break my heart i think ;;
thanks for updating <33
infinitaehyung
#18
Chapter 2: TAEMIN BRINGING JONGIN YES PLS
will jongin almost drown o_o
THIS IS SO!!!!! i am so excited idek i'M LEAVING USELESS COMMENTS BYE
infinitaehyung
#19
Chapter 1: I WAS GOING TO DO CHEMISTRY HOMEWORK BUT YOU > CHEM ANY DAY SO
I AM SO EXCITED OMG MERMAID TAEMIN?? YAAAS PLEZ but jongin pLZ HE'S A MERMAID JUST OPEN YOUR EYES
also i want ice cream now thx mom
Beybey77 #20
Chapter 2: Your world building already has me in deep with this fic. What DOES Taemin mean by bringing him under?? Omg how cute and awesome if that's a possibility. Like the reverse of every mermaid story ever written (with the human exploring the underwater world, and not the usual way around). And I love how endearing you've made Jongin by having a worldly way of thinking but still spitting out awkwardness. His personality clashes well with Taemin's coolness and playfulness.

And damn Jongin for stopping Taemin's hands! Taemin just wants to learn about human anatomy better, that's all. Stop making Jongin so inconsiderate. *smirk*