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goojayhee #1
Chapter 14: WAIT,MOM HOW CAN YOU DO THIS????
Seriously?! How could he be this cruel??!!!!!
I'm trying really hard to keep my sanity in place here, but...but... HOW could he do this?!
Can you make the king disappear, seriously I don't care I just want him gone ㅠ.ㅠ
I'm going crazy, HOW COULD HE DO THIS????
Please tell you are going to fix my broken heart!!!
I want the next chapter ASAP like RIGHT. NOW.
Thank you for the update although it left me with such a painful feelings ㅠ.ㅠ
Can't wait for the next chapter, fighting^^
infinitaehyung
#2
Chapter 14: hEY YOU WAIT YOU CANT DO THIS WHAT IS THIS WHY YOU CANT BUT YOU DID WHY DID YOU
I HAVE ANOTHER THEORY but honestly i'm just trying to keep my sanity intact now
KYUNGSOO DIES BUT HIS ~SOUL~ IS STILL THERE BECAUSE PHYSICS AND CHEMISTRY STUFF YKNOW ENERGY CANT BE GONE ITS JUST GOES SOMEWHERE ELSE OR TURNS INTO STH ELSE SO LIKE HE GET REINCARNATED AND HIS SOUL IS PLACED IN A HUMAN BODY AND JOGNOG FINDS HIM AND HAPPY EVERYONE
AND JINKI Y U NO SWIM AWAY are they executed by hanging idgi ARENT THEY FLOATIN G IN WATER AKJDHFDFKEH NO DEAD JINKI PLS ELLIE
or what if this is one of those trick chapters like the one you did in not otherwise specified
NO ONE DIES RIGHT MOM PLS
thanks for the update even though you broke my heart ;_;
springjasmine91
#3
Chapter 14: Thats it? How cruel u are the king.....very unfair.....fighting for the next chapter
goojayhee #4
Chapter 13: Seriously???! I was listening to 'Bleeding Love' while reading the chapter and I wish I wasn't :(
Until when you're keeping on breaking my heart? ㅠ.ㅠ
Ughhhhh, please let them be okay!!!
You definitely have a thing for cliffhangers, don't you?!
Fighting for your next update hon.^^
infinitaehyung
#5
Chapter 13: all my hope is like whooosh into the sea
i'm so pessimistic iekgwjawlkegj brain cannot words today i'm sorry
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING \( ̄▽ ̄)/
infinitaehyung
#6
Chapter 12: wtf eLLIE I THOUGHT WE WERE OVER THE YOU BREAKING MY HEART LIKE THIS THINGG UAKWEJHGEJKHERGU
I'M SO SAD SOMEONE AKSJHGEWIU DYING BYE
jk HI kyuGNDOO'S EXECUTION CANT BE AEKCAMGNDFBG
i cant even
JOGNOG FIX THINGS
goojayhee #7
Chapter 12: I was super busy so I couldn't read the previous one, so here I'm after reading the two chapters,
Now about the previous chapter: I gotta tell that I love Jinki's character here, he's amazing.
And finally Jongin and Taemin made up woohoooo!
No about this chapter, WHAT THE?! How? When? Who????? WHAT??!
I'm speechless right now, how could this happen?? No!!!!!!
Why????? Hopefully everything will be okay.
I seriously need the next chapter ASAP like RIGHT. NOW.
Can't wait for your next update, fighting^^
springjasmine91
#8
Chapter 12: Wait what? When did this happened?! Goodness am confused. Fighting for the next chapter
infinitaehyung
#9
Chapter 11: OMG YAAAAAY JONGIN AND TAEMIN MADE UP
SO I BET SEHUN PUT THE TOWEL AROUND HIM!!!!!!
JINKI THO I AM IN LOVE WITH JINKI
I NEED TO PREPARE MY BODY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE BAE <3 SORRY FOR THE TY COMMENT OTL
springjasmine91
#10
Chapter 11: Oh jinki oppa. Haha well at least taemin and jongin made up. Fighting for the next chapter
goojayhee #11
Chapter 10: Okay, I know it's late but I was very sick and couldn't check your update yesterday so yeah....
This chapter is full of pain and heartache, jonginxkyungsoo, jonginxtaemin it's so painful ㅠ.ㅠ
Though I really wish kyungsoo won't marry the girl (whomever she is), I want him to be with jongin and hopefully they will have their happy ending.
I wonder who put the towel on jongin?! Sehun? Taemin? Kyungsoo?! Though I doubt it's kyungsoo....
I wonder what's gonna happen next!
Can't wait for your next update^^
infinitaehyung
#12
Chapter 10: I HAVE A THEORY
THIS COULD BE LIKE LITTLE MERMIAD!!!! EVIL WITCH GIVES SOO LEGS AND HE CAN NEVER SPEAK OR SING AGAIN BUT JONGIN CARES FOR HIM ON THE SURFACE IUAHEWKJGIEJ YES YES YSES
jongin's words to taemin hurt me tho.. ;_;
and i wonder who put the towel on jongin owo taeman??? sebooty??
springjasmine91
#13
Chapter 10: This is getting more and more complicated... fighting for the next chapter
infinitaehyung
#14
Chapter 9: hEeeYeyeyeYE why U HURT SEHOOOON ijenafuih heart hurts
kaisoo is making me v nervous with their sneaking around and taemin!!! needs to talk!!! to his friends!!!
uGh feels i cant sentences
DONT UPDATE OK JUST FOCUS ON YOUR EXAMS!!
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE <3
goojayhee #15
Chapter 9: Thank god it's time for me to sleep so I can check the website, I had a freaking long day and had no time to check on your story.
I was preparing myself to sleep when I remembered I hadn't checked your story.
Now about the chapter:
This chapters made my heart clench in a painful way for jonginxkyungsoo, taeminx junmyeon, jonginxsehun....
Those painful feelings though...
Hopefully jongin will fix things between him and sehun they're best friends after all.
And I wonder how will things work between Jongin and kyungsoo when they end up together, can one of live underwater or on earth O.o?! How?! (They're going to end up together right? You will give them their happy ever after, right? Pretty please *puppy eyes*
Can't wait for your next update :)

P.s: don't worry about updating next week, focus on your exams they're important also good luck on your exam honey^^
springjasmine91
#16
Chapter 9: Neglect... jongin..poor taemin and sehun. Fighting for the next chapter
goojayhee #17
Chapter 8: I read the chapter earlier today but I was a little bit busy and now it's 1:30 am I was preparing myself to sleep when I remembered I didn't leave a comment, so here I am.

My heart was aching the whole time while reading this chapter.
It's so saaaaaaaad~
I'm really curious about kyungsoo and his relationship is it because kyungsoo is okay with humans while his father not? Or it's something else? Something bigger?
I wonder what's gonna happen next?!

My mind is blank right now 'cause I'm so sleepy so forgive me for the short comment ma~ love you~
Fighting for your next chapter^^
infinitaehyung
#18
Chapter 8: angst hnnnnnn mi hart (i love angst tbh especially when i'm sad)
KYUNGSOO DONT PUSH JUNMYEON AWAYyyyyYYyyY
uGh feels i cant form any proper thoughts rn forGivE ME MOm
head over tails tho HAHAHA and jongin swimming away like a betch i love your a/n's okay
thanks for the update bae <3
springjasmine91
#19
Chapter 8: God...their fate...too cruel...fighting for the next chapter
infinitaehyung
#20
Chapter 7: hey i have an idea why dont we like
kill the king off right now bcos
KAISOO NEED TO BE TOGETHER OK youRe Doing tHE AGNST TIHNG AGAIN
i feel so sorry for sehun tho, maybe jongin could bring him under as well? or introduce him to taemin? ;_;
and jongnog why YOU leEeEaaaAAve
thanks for the update! <3