I’m really impressed with the acrostic poetic feature of the chapter titles making beautiful sentences. I haven’t come across this on any other story so far on AFF. I enjoyed your creativity. Congratulations on getting the ad. I look forward to reading this story soon when I can.
Chapter 38: It's funny when I first read the summary of the story, I always thought Yejin and Jackson will end up together. Maybe it's kind of good that they didn't end up together and they seem to become great friends. Their relationship kind of reminded me of Zhang Xiao (main female lead) and Huang Di (ex-boyfriend) from Scarlet Heart 2. I also didn't expect for Youngjae and Jaebum to also fall for Yejin but I'm glad Yejin found the right one among them.
Chapter 28: I don't why I couldn't help but let out a laugh when Jackson told Yejin he's going to ask her to be his girlfriend. Maybe since everyone already considers the two to be a couple even though I don't think he ever asks her to become his girlfriend during the times she spent with him.
Chapter 21: Why do I have this feeling that Jackson could be doing this to protect her? At the same time, I'm thinking maybe he really decided to break things off with her after what happened to him.
Chapter 3: No offense to Jackson but no girl would return your feelings if what you're doing to her is like bullying. While he may be doing it to get her attention, he might unexpectedly make her hate him.
Chapter 22: Oh that burn at the end of this chapter. I'm glad Yejin found a form of revenge that isn't harmful towards herself, but actually helps her in the long run. Sorry for not commenting all the time, but I really am enjoying this story, I just keep reading and forget to comment lol. Thanks for writing!
Chapter 13: This chapter was probably the cutest one so far. Nothing was forced, and they both seemed genuinely happy to spend time with one another. I like that Jackson didn't completely show her up, and that he was making it fun for Yejin as well, it shows that he cares about her happiness, in the smallest way. It's so cute!
Loved this chapter! Thanks for writing!
Chapter 2: Now he's bullying her?! Like for real Jackson, there are better ways of getting her attention, like I don't know, maybe being nice to her? Jerk.
I love this story so far! I'm curious to know what's going to happen between them. I wish Jackson would approach things differently.
Chapter 1: I feel as though Jackson shouldn't keep messing with her, even if they were to make a friendship out of nothing, it only occurred because Jackson was being a narcissist by betting that she liked him. It's obvious Yejin has several problems with her home and social life, so mocking her would be completely unfair.
Then again, what kind of story would it be if Jackson didn't keep bugging her haha I like the story so far, and enjoy your way of writing, it's simple and to the point, but detailed enough to paint a picture. I look forward to reading more :)
i think it's pretty cute how she didn't really stay with one person throughout the entire story... like it shows more perspective and feels more real but on a side note this was really cute
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