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Marrying the Tuan Family by princessmato

Genre: Drama, Romance, Arranged Marriage

Characters: Mark Tuan (GOT7), Yoon Sae Mi (OC)

Status: Ongoing

Story summary: A simple marriage was to happen, but they paired up two unlikely people together.

Notes From Reviewer

BlackEmoLover: I was kinda descriptive but hope you liked it. I tend to give advice so I'm sorry if this review is super long :)

REMINDERS : DON'T FORGET TO CREDIT THE SHOP BY USING THE BANNER AND CREDIT THE REVIEWER. COMMENT WHEN YOU PICK UP.

Title (3/5)

Your title is simple, not very eye catching. But it fits your story perfectly, so there's nothing wrong with it. Just little lacking with originality.

Description & Foreword (6/10)

The foreword and description is really neat and pretty as well {and simple too}. There a few mistakes/better words to use for the description ;

[1] In the beginning, 'Arranged marriage is like a blind date' , it's better to use 'An arranged marriage' .

[2] "...except that it's supposed to last a lifetime" is better used.

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