Civil War

Description

Jonghyun lives a normal life and is at the laundromat waiting for his clothes to get washed when a handsome stranger puts his blood stained clothes in the washing machine next to his during the civil war.

Foreword

[Trigger Warning: Mentions of murder/blood and war etc !!!]

This is based in an alternative universe where it’s war I guess? Civil war? Yes a civil war sounds good. Also, should you call them men or boys? I ended up with men.

 

Pairing: JongKey

Genre: Fluff, Civil War AU

Word count: 2K

Status: One Shot

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Rellamellow #1
Wait oh my god did you really decide to make this a chaptered story aka write a sequel? *0*
that-fangirl #2
Chapter 1: This was interesting :) I really enjoyed it ^^
Rellamellow #3
Chapter 1: Oh my god. I really loved the setting of all this and it also seemed pretty realistic.
I also really liked Jonghyun on this one. He totally seems like that type. While the keepers and peace makers are fighting, he's completely staying out of the conflict, yet he's hurting so much.
I don't really know what else to say, this was just awesome. The whole plot and also the characters.
I feel like you could really make this a chaptered fic, if you wanted to (and of course had the time), also because there are so many questions left unanswered. Is Kibum just trying to make Jonghyun come to his side and holds no real interest in him whatsoever? Or is he really attracted to him? Will he still try to make him choose a side? What happens when Kibum runs out of money? Will the civil war ever cometo an end? What are the reasons for the war?
Good job, ans maybe think about it? *^*
PrMrulez #4
ohh wow ^.^ i really liked it!
It has a quiet a unique plot, i don't think that there would be many people thinking something out like this.
I liked the fact that I could really imagine Jonghyun being like that, in that king of situation, him being the "sensitive soul" type of man, and Kibum stating his mind beside what he thinks is right, being dedicated to his beliefs.
I don't really know why, but it really got to me, i mean the setting and all. Don't know what your plans are. If you thought about writing about them, maybe how they meet while the time passes and the war gets to it's end, but if you think about it, I would be here, reading all of it.
Thank you for your hard work, keep it up ^.^
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