Chapter 1: Oh my god so so so adorable. Congrats on this beautiful plot. Amazing. Even though the story is really good though, grammar is a bit of distraction for readers. So I was going to ask you if you wanted me to help you with your grammatical errors? :) I would really be glad to help you with that because this story is really good. But because it is kind of a distraction for the reader, people might not want to read all the way. So I wanted to ask you just in case. If you do not accept, I understand, and that's okay. :) Good plot and ideas author-nim! Do not stop writing!

Chapter 1: I ing love this omg

Chapter 1: This was amazing.

Chapter 1: blessed u author-nim. this is incredibly awesome. you did a very good job. perfect. and i love it so much. keep making story especially jikook hehehe :D

Chapter 1: oh wow this was great!!!!! i loved it~~

Chapter 1: Omg this story is so beautiful!!! I love it so much!! I even cried so hard at some parts:') WONDERFUL STORY MY FAVOURITE SO FAR

Chapter 1: that was incredibly great, like heck. everything was organized perfectly. still lost for words. well, definitely one of the longest story i've ever read, but it was good though. you might have a grammatical error, but it wasn't show up too visibly. so it was readable and mostly enjoyed of reading it. seriously you did an excellent job!

Chapter 1: this is just amazing.
just.
amazing.
i have no words.
thank you for this masterpiece. Glad to read it

p.s. and thanks for yoonseok also

Chapter 1: THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! I almost cry, okay? I really glad that I found and read this story...I really fell in love with jimin in this fic(in reallity too). He is so kind, lovely, gergous omg..I can't describe it! jungkook is so lucky to meet him..and has him...this is really the best oneshot jikook fic ever >w< thanks for write this. and yes! you should proud of yourself! Hwaiting for the next story!

Chapter 1: Afhjsdgjk..this is so beautifull I'm gonna cry T_T thanks~ authornim