Chapter 1: It's cute. But I hope the story is more detailed and you'll explore her(or their) feelings more. I know that she wants his attention since he acts cold toward her (though I don't think he was too cold with how he showed her that he cared in his own way), but the way you portray her makes her look a bit clingy. Then again I can understand why she's like that, especially if you have (kind of) cold husband and you're pregnant. Hahaha
Please don't be offended. I'm not saying the story is bad, but I think it could be better. I just want what's the best for you. I myself am not perfect, so sorry if I offended you in any way. Thank you for sharing this story. Have a nice day. ^^

Chapter 1: Hmmmm same as me,,, I can feel what yoona feel

Chapter 1: Thanks you,i am a big musketeer here !! I'll wait for the next part :))

Chapter 1: Aaaahh kyu is really romantic but stupid at the same time. This story is really good hope the kyu's version will be released soon. Anyway i found many typos but you don't have to worry about them and hope you can do your best for the exam good luck;)

P.s. You probably know who i am xD

Chapter 1: Kyuhyun such a romantic bastard ...but why i love him so much ? kyuna all the way :))

Chapter 1: Awww so sweeet luckily he make it up if not ishh2

Chapter 1: Huwaaa
So sweet
Kyu oppa bener2 dingin
Hihihi
Oenni mau kyu oppa pov
Hehhe