Never thought i'd fall in love with you [UNFINISHED sorry i've stopped writing this story]

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Hello! 

this is my first fanfic and sorry if it's not a perfect one, i just wanted to try to make one and see what do you guys think...

and please comment.

Enjoy! ^^

Cast:

Park Ha Rin (you) :

You're pretty,smart and funny..... You're afraid to love again of because of what happend to you and your mother (the details are in the story) . You learn that your dad died and he left you all of his fortunes to you but you can only have it when you are 18 years old.

During your birthday, you met a guy and you're heart started beating for him. But you learn that he's a playboy. What will you do??

Donghae:

  

He's hot,smart ,talented, every girl falls for him in one glance,and everyone calls him a prince.  He's the reason why Ha Rin's heart stars beating all of a sudden.

Heechul:

 

Your Bestfriend. You know him since you were just a little girl. But what you don't know is that he's loves you.

 

(I put 3 photos of them each because they look so GORGEOUS!!! xD)

 

And credits to musicandseven / Pauline (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/33699) (http://playful-melody.blogspot.com/2011/10/musicandseven.html) for making an awsome poster~! ^^ <3

 

 

Foreword

[You're POV]

OMG!! in about 4 hours is my 18th Birtday!!! i can't belive it!!!!!! I'm so happy!! But, what should i do? all my friends are never here during my birthdays because it's during the summer vacation....

[end of POV]

You your computer and logged in to skype.Then your bestfriend starts calling you (on skype).

your bestfriend:

- HELLO HA RIIIN!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY IN ADVANCE!!! i miss you so much!!

-HI! and i miss you too!!!. you said.

-I'm so sorry that i'm not there during you're birthday! i had to come to New York with my parents..

-It's okay, i'm fine, no need to worry. you said.

-well okay... I have a present for you!!!

.Really?! what is it??. i said.

-It's a secret... Oh sorry i have to go but we'll talk again tomorrow! BYE!!

-Okay bye!!

 

You were sad because you're friends won't be there during you're birthday tomorrow.

You showered and went to sleep....

Pachuchii
Hey, i'm working on the next chapter, but i don't know when i'll be posting it... And i have my final exams on June 4 --" please bare it with me! :)

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angel116 #1
Chapter 32: Oh please update!
h3d1ez
#2
doonghae<33
iloveelmo23
#3
Chapter 32: happy birthday XD
SujuAnni4-ever
#4
Chapter 32: Happy birthday <3
tirasuilvolume
#5
damn you Yoona! I'm torn... I love both Heechul and Donghae!
SujuAnni4-ever
#6
YoonA I hate you.... I think Heechul is the better one for Harin. Heechul Hwaiting. ^^
tirasuilvolume
#7
NOOOOO YOONA!!!!!
SujuAnni4-ever
#8
Yoona........ I don't like her.
SujuAnni4-ever
#9
Donghae!? What are you doing?!?! Go and say sorry! :D I love this story. Update soon ^^
tirasuilvolume
#10
Donghae you jerk! Don't do this to her! :(
Update soon!!!!! Love this story!