Man in the Portrait
(Special Review) - Man in the Portrait
REVIEW
MAN IN THE PORTRAIT
Reviewer's Notes
Please excuse any grammatical errors. I'm too lazy to check them out before publishing. Comment once you've read this! Thank you :)
Title (3.5/5):
I like it. It is simple and straightforward. The title you had chosen reflects contains of the story and readers can easily tell the main point or idea of what they will find out throughout the story just by looking at the title alone. It isn’t a rare title, but also not a commonly used one. Perhaps you can change it into something more stunning and beautiful – an extraordinary one. I would have given you some thoughts for this but please excuse my slow working brain – I couldn’t think of any suitable title for now. But it is good enough, to be honest. It’s not particularly attracts me into your story, however, it gives a vibe.
Appearance (4/5):
I wouldn’t give many thoughts for appearance because I don’t think it is an important aspect to be looked out for as long as it is neat and not messy. So, your poster is great. It matches the concepts of the story well, and it fits the genres too. The font used is also tidy and clean. To put it simply, I’ve got nothing to say here. The appearance is satisfying, though I would like to suggest you to use different font, and maybe changing the size of font as well? Just make it a little bigger, in case some of your readers have problems with their eyes?
Alright, I’m joking. It is well done. Congratulates!
Foreword (6.5/10):
Erm… I think you spoiled your readers too much. You actually tell them quite a lot about the plot of the story in your foreword! When I first started reading, I’ve got many questions inside my head. But then, you answer it right away. You gave too much of what will happen in the future. I’m not saying it’s wrong, but it kills the fun. I can guess the ending from it.
Well, here is some advises. First of all, I think you shouldn’t mention their names. Like, you should let your readers wonder who’s truly in the portrait. You can manipulate them and think of ways on making it sou
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