Chapter 1: sequel :(

Chapter 1: Is there a sequel? :3

Chapter 1: Sequellllllll pleaseeeee :)

this story seem's like the maze runner! well, abit different anyway i hoped you'll update or make a sequel ^^

Chapter 1: I'll be honest I don't know APink or Beast, but it seemed that regardless of such, it was intriguing to read anyway.
The flow was one that was natural, precise and clean, just the way it should be.
The description was so detailed and well-written, that I was immediately drawn in and had a racing hard as I went from paragraph to paragraph.
Personally it would be amazing if this was a multi-chapter, in that, you have many opportunities to play around with plot and the development of each character.
I sense it could make for a captivating story line.
In summary, I liked it very much despite having little knowledge of the characters in question. ^_^'

Chapter 1: This was really good! I want sequels please please please!

Oh my god i'd love to read whats going to happen after this! xx

Chapter 1: Wow. This is really good so far. I've never read anything like it. I can't wait to see what happens.

Chapter 1: Oh my goddd!! Sequel pls? Omg this story is so good-