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Beyond the Wall
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Ever since Yoongi could remember, the great wall had stood between the two sides of the city, keeping the undesirables from the upper society. As a child he had thought that the other side of the wall must hold sicky, diseased and dangerous people, but as he grew he learned that his side of the wall was the undesirable.

It made no snese to him: his life was fine, his family had food and water and never truly needed for anything, and so he couldn't imagine how they were considered the lowly side. How lavishly must the other half live so as to make what he had seem undesirable? And yet the wall kept everyone perfectly on their sides, kept them from crossing over to find out the truth.

Mostly, anyway.

Yoongi had always been a bit athletic, though no one could really guess as much from how lazy he often acted. He would never go out of his way to do something that required too much effort for little payback, but his curiousity won him over, and one day, he decided that he wanted to know what lay over the wall. Find out what was so precious that it must be kept sacred from average people like him.

Everyone said it couldn't be done; even his father had stories of his own escapades in trying to find what was so special beyond the wall, but none of them had what Yoongi possessed: a natural gift at climbing. Even as a child he could climb anything, proven by the time that he had reached the summit of his family's small home when he was only four years old, determined to see as far as he could. His mother had nearly had a heart attack when she found him and it took nearly an hour for his paretns to figure out a way to reach and 'rescue' him. He certainly didn't see it as a rescue and was up there the very next day, much to his mother's chagrin.

Now he sat on the park bench underneath an apple tree, looking at the great wall with a calculating look in his eyes. He knew that people would call him crazy, he knew that his attempt to go to the other side could very possibly spell jail time for him, but he couldn't quell the deep seated need to know. Standing smoothly, he glanced around to ensure that no one was around in the deepening evening; everyone was in a hurry to get home, leaving the park nearly empty as he decided to make his first attempt.

He'd examined the wall often he had made up his mind to try the climb, and so he already knew how he wanted to go about this endeavor. His hands were clad with fingerless gloves, giving him the freedom of movement that he would need while still offering protection if he slipped. Though he hoped that he wouldn't slip, it woudl be a long fall down. No one had ever measured the wall but to his eyes, he could guess it was only about thirty feet tall.

Not too daunting a task for the young man, and so with a final glance to make sure he was alone, he reached up and gripped the first handhold he could find. The bricks of the wall were rough and one of every few had a good quarter inches of space for his to wedge his fingers into, and it seemed that in no time, he was halfway up the wall and barely breathing hard. He tried to keep from looking down, knowing that seeing how far off of the ground he was might st about his downfall, and simply kept focused on the goal ahead of him.

He reached the top with relative ease, his fingers burning from the roughness of the bricks, but as he swung his legs over the top to take a seat on the great wall, he felt his breath leave him. The city stretched out beyond him was rife with lights, with a business that seemed to make his side of the wall look paltry in comparison. He glanced back just to afirm the comparison. He'd never felt that his lif was lacking, but sitting up here, seeing all the great lights and perfectly manicured lawns, he wondered if this truly was the better side of the wall.

He heard movement from below, movement on hi side of the wall, and a quick glance down told him that patrols were finally coming around. They were few and far between, knowing that no one would ever dare to attempt the wall, but they were still there to remind people not to do it. Unfortunately, in that glance down he doomed himself. One of the passing guardsmen must have seen the movement of his body, because a cry went up and the man pointed upward to single Yoongi out to his fellow soldiers.

"Get off of that wall! Get back down here!" the angry shout rose, and Yoongi knew right then that if he climbed back down to his side of the wall, he would be shackled and taken away. Why seeing the other side was so bad, he had no idea, but he wasn't about to let them capture him. Deftly he the wall and without even thinking it all the way through, he began his descent to the other side. He could hear the soldiers panicking s they shouted orders to get to the nearest gate, but as he moved downward, their shouts faded.

He was quick, faster than the climb up had been, and when he reached the ground he knew that he had to run. And run he did, off to find shelter so as to avoid capture. And maybe, just maybe, he could learn what made this side of the wall so much better.

 

Luna gave a huff as she looked into the mirror, her perfectly coifed hair and impeccably applied makeup only making her feel like a doll inside of a dollhouse. She was done up for the evening's main event, a great party thrown by her uncle so as to welcome her into the city's elite, but she felt so out of place. She had just come home from school in the North country where she had been primed to be married and start a family, but she found that all she really wanted was to be free. Free of the expectations and rigidity of society, free from living her life at another's beck and call. What would it be like to live beyond the wall, to live as an Undesirable? Everyone always said that they were ill-educated, animalistic people, but she couldn't help but to think that the lack of order might be so much better than this life.

"Mistress, are you ready?" a tall, pretty woman in servant's garb caught her attention, her eyes downcast as if she were afraid to meet Luna's eyes, and the petite girl gave a sigh before nodding.

"Yes," she figured she would never be more ready than she was now, despite her truly wanting to simply run and throw off this ridiculous red dress. It was the color of her coming of age, the symbol of her being ready to marry off to whomever he uncle needed to make an alliance with, but it was the color that she hated. To her, it was a symbol of her being ready to go to market for the highest bidder to buy.

Pulling her chin up and stretching herself to her greatest height, she exited the door and made her way for the grand stairs, her high heeled shoes making her feel entirely too unstable to make it down the staircase without falling. She gripped the banister tightly and with a practiced smile pasted on her face, began her slow descent into what she considered hell.

The many party-goers paused in their conversations to ooh and ahh over the girl in the red dress, the girl of the hour, but Luna's gaze focused on one man and one man only. Her uncle stood by the great fireplace, his long slender fingers curled around his wine glass as he watched her greedily. She knew that she was no more than a cash cow to him and that thought saddened and revolted her. Would her parents have been the same, had they lived past her own young childhood? Would they see her as only a possible financial and status advancement?

Those thoughts were of no matter, thouhg, because her uncle was the one who mattered, and he came forward to take her elbow as she stepped foot onto the main floor. "Come and meet your betrothed," he said, a smile already forming on his face as he likely thought of what he would be gaining in exchange for her hand in marriage, and like the dutiful niece that she always tried to be, she swallowed back her distaste and kept the fake smile planted on her lips.

He led her across the room, many people stopping them to congratulate her uncle on how beautiful she was, and finally stopped before a tall young man with a sharp jawline who looked down at her without even a hint of smile on his face. "Luna, this is Andrew Kim, he is your fiance," her uncle said proudly, passing her hand into the hand of the giant in front of her, but even when she gave a curtsy and smile at him, his face didn't change a hair.

The two men made small talk over her head as she studied her fiance; his sharp features

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justlieforme
#1
Chapter 1: Lovely story. I really enjoyed it!
-Yuan-
#2
Chapter 1: I know said I shouldn't read but I had too after you brought up ghee. And i have to disgaree you totally captured me from
the first sentence on. As you know i don't know either of them well thoigh both kind of give me an image it wouldn't be thpically a vouple i would enjoy reading about. however i did enjoy this. and not because it was barely coulely but because i liker the dynamic and the flow. I wavered a bit at lunas part. she wasn't as smoothly written as sugar and felt a little flatter and less thought trough. it however matched because she came from this pretty life and kets be honest extreme welathy people can be a little shallow (not all of course but if captured in a golden cage) so it wasn't off outting but their was just less to her. Like you introduce suga we knew why he was good in climbing (teough his childhood) we knew about his character a good bit but that all was missing for luna, this totally empathizes that she may not have had a very thrilling live that has allowed her to build
her own character. which is on one way great to portray the shalowness of the world but makes it hard for the reader to empathise with her. So like rather then repeatedly point out how she was just money i her uncles eyes and how awful her giance was here it would have been better to set examples or show not tell. Also the cashcow felt out of place like i was confused if she was sold of for money or connection. it felt it mixed and that would be okay but their was no clear line. So it was harder to root for her and her desire for freedome. the ending felt a bit rushed. lile it would have been nice how they might have destroyed the efidenced of her past life (the dress) or yongis parents at leash. because even if she was an undesirable didn't they still do a crime with treepassing and wouldn't they still want to punish yoongi? i mean obviously if they didn't saw his face they couldn't know or find him but it would be wise to get ride of evidence neitherless no?
also that the guards weren't more present on the way back. they should be panicking and searchibg for him and this moght have been their chance to pass trough the gate or climb bacl but the gate would be more belivable since she probably never climbed. but those thibgs are really minor because it doesn't really tool away reading enjoyment. and all in all it was a solid great story that i really loved and enjoyed to read. best evidence for it i'm still awake and not sleepy despite it just pass 2 am here.
Do thinks i loved the most where how you set up yoongi, we (reader) understood and felt similar to his curiosity. the hints how he felt for her and how she was aware but not taken aback or adhamed. impying that she knows her worth. i love that because it makes it more belivable for het to run. she knows she deserves better. and yongis parents reaction in the backflash as well as when she came home even though only brushed as they are secondary to the story they gave more depths an reality to it.
so thank you cery much for writting and sharing it certainly was an very inspiering read and i also loved the morality topic of today society it brushed. i loved how in the end it makes you overthink your own matrialsm and choices and lingers as more then just another love story which makes this so great. devinitively one of my favorite stories so far, though i think you can do a lot better it's perfect for a short story!

since i wrote this from my phone they are probably a lot of typos i'm sorry about that.
you know sausages fingers!
Elleally
#3
Chapter 1: I really liked this! Hoping for a sequel!
enehkiux #4
Chapter 1: Luna and Suga pairing is so refreshing and funny enough I actually ship these two way before this fanfic (wth they have no legit moments ever and I am only open to the idea because 93 liner). I enjoy this story. Money does not buy one happiness and being less than the rich does not make you pitiful at all. Love is greater than anything in this world.
FruityBooTae
#5
Chapter 1: Ughh.. O.O I never thought about Suga and Luna together TT^TT You proved me wrong. This is so ... I don't know what to say, but, I. Loved. It! =^3^=
Zelda96 #6
Chapter 1: This was such a beautiful story! It's the first time I've read a story with a Luna x Suga pairing and they look great together! :D Thank you author-nim!
kpopfever111
#7
Chapter 1: I like it- a fluffy oneshot was just what I needed today :)

You are always making me reconsider ships! :) <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#8
Chapter 1: I really loved this story. Sure, it was cute and a little nerve wracking with the forbidden garden like thing, but it also helped us to see that there's way more to life than money and social games and other BS. And like Yoongi, we should be thankful for the freedom and blessings we already have <3
Amalya
#9
Chapter 1: *flails some more* It gets better with a second read through! lol

Totally loved the way it played out and I think you nailed Yoongi and Luna's characters. Nice play with Yoongi and his laziness, though the climbing ability was entertaining for sure. The back story you gave us for him as a child was hilarious! And pretty much all of his interactions with Luna when they were climbing. I cracked up with his thinking when he was following her. Oh dear. Poor blushing baby. But that's what made it so funny. haha

I'm also so happy with the way you wrote Luna too. I can totally see her rebelling against that sort of life and I appreciated that little spark of defiance, even if it didn't entirely manifest. Her fiance is an . I guess he's a product of his world for sure but damn. I would have wanted to escape too. How fortuitous that Yoongi was there and wholly unable to keep himself from being 'helpful'. lol I had lots of favorite lines here but I think I really enjoyed the line with "then he found himself doing possibly the most stupid thing he'd ever done in his life." XD So true but the possibilities afterwards are amazing! heh

The climb was tense and breathtaking and I appreciated his attempt (mostly successful) in catching her. And then his parent's reactions were priceless. I like his mom. heh :) It also makes sense the following morning and you really hammered the point home with Yoongi's introspection. Very well done overall and I am more than pleased! Thank you so much again! <3 You are awesome!
DGNA_Forever
#10
This story looks very intriguing=).