[Review] The Bird Slayers
La Bell Writing & Graphic Contest [Closed]
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Thoughts on the story: Nice story! There was some really funny parts to the story. They became friends in the end (somewhat) and that's a good thing. The story however was missing a lot of details. I was hoping you explain the gods in a better detail. For example, I had no idea who "Hypnos" was. The story was short and left me unsatisfied ending. It was a fun read.
Recommend?: I would recommend this story to anyone who wants a good laugh and a short story on the gods.
Points earned: 70/100
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