Chapter 1: Few years bit too late, but I love this!!
Especially the last sentence hahaha
I'm glad they are opening up to each other at last, despite of their opposite personalities
Seriously. It is equal parts hilarious, sweet and wellwritten. Moreover, there are side YeWook and even twice-mentioned WonYe! Lol... Amazing :D
I love that Kyu was smart enough and courageous as hell to be doing that on his birthday :) JW is frustrating but how can you not love him, amirite? So cute and adorable gaaaah
I love everything about this fic! It definitely is one of my most fave KyuSung fics ever ~
Chapter 1: Oh the ending, it's too cheesy for me XD But LOL! Why did I feel like I was watching a movie when Kyuhyun held his little 'I-love-you-and-I-want-you-for-my-birthday-and-I'm-scared-of-thunder' speech? Very well written, I could totally see it happening and I was like "AWWW" the whole time and wanted to kick Jongwoon's for not paying better attention.
Anyway, back to the start haha. I felt so bad for Kyuhyun omg! I really love dumb Jongwoon, but he shouldn't hurt my Kyuhyun! >:( But I forgive him, because his birthday present thingie was cute. Just 5 sets, that thing must be really special XD Must for online gaming tho, what Kyuhyun loves so much. If you are lucky, you have 4 people to play with hahaha.
Now onto the special thingies, inserting some quotes from your story:
""Kyuhyun?"
"WHAT?!"
"This is my flat.""
--> HAHA THE BEST
""Kyuhyun, what are you doing here?"
Kyuhyun snapped into focus. Here goes. "It's my birthday."
"Yes, I believe we already covered that fact.""
--> Jongwoon's brilliant reply, love love LOVE
""I want you for my birthday, Jongwoon."
Jongwoon laughed nervously"
--> CUTE T-T
Okay that's about it. Hope you enjoyed reading my comment as much as I enjoyed reading your fic. I shall read your other ones in the future =^^= keep on rocking~!
Whoah... you should definitely write mooore! You made my emotions on a roller coaster ride... glad that they work things out and stupid Jongwoon is stupid hahaha... but I love how Kyuhyun was determined to get him back... good job!
Chapter 1: This was so good~
Yesung being an insecure idiot and Kyuhyun being a fail at communicating is probably the worst relationship combination possible. Thankfully Kyuhyun was persistent enough so things worked out. It's better when they are stupid together ^^
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