☑ cuteismysterious
Mental Breakdown Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ ARCHIVES"Sasaeng's Pen"
Author: cuteismysterious
Main Characters: Yong Jinkyu (You/OC), EXO's Baekhyun and various Korean Idols
Genre: Drama
Status: On-going
Description of Story: "Do not judge a book by it's cover," they say. But why does the society kept on judging without researching and actually meeting us?
Critique:
Story Title: 4/5
Your title was unique but not catchy. That’s why you lost a mark for it, however, good job for making it sound unique!
Graphics: 2/10
Your poster and background disgusted me. I suggest that you request one as it really didn’t suit your story, even though you explained the meanings behind each part of your poster.
Description and Foreword: 4/10
Your description was hard to understand. It’s because you used incorrect grammar which did somehow match the sentence. Also, you should have explained that Sasaeng is a Korean word along with the definition. The meaning behind the poster was not needed as your poster really didn’t show anything, to be honest.
Characterization: 3/10
While reading your story I really couldn’t catch a definite personality
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