Chapter 15: Hello :) I had just reactivated my account and seen that you guys finished my request :) I credited your shop in the foreword of my story. Goodness, I requested this ad last year hahaha ^_^ You must have been busy at the time, because I waited for the ad status, but whenever I checked it wasn't done. I though you guys dropped the shop :( So glad you didn't :) Thank you for your work!
Hi! I'm actually one of those under the pending list for the story reviews. I just want to inform your shop that I changed my username from "claring95" to "jarinoona". Thanks! :D
Thank you so much for your review! I'm taking your opinions to the heart (in a good way). Thank you for your praises, and as of now, I shall give you feedback for your criticism on the "Plot, Flow, and Consistency" since it was indeed my main concern:
"Lack of description can cause confusion among readers. For example, I had no idea where they were in the first scene. I'm going to get an excerpt from the story."
Right when I read this, a lightbulb clicked in my head and I pinpointed exactly what you were talking about. I knew there had to be a reason I didn't like my first chapter lol. I always felt there was something wrong with it . . . like the scenes were jumping around too much . . . and you just found the reasons why. Too much dialogues and not enough about the settings and surroundings. Thank you for pointing this out!
As for everything else, thank you for being so detailed! I'm relieved that it gives me less to worry about.
Okay, I was gonna try to not be so damn conceited about myself, but your reaction of Sungyeol grabbing Jungkook made me laugh out loud xD (I must be crazy.)
I'm fixing the grammar mistakes right away!
And oh snap, 93.5! THANK YOU <3 Can't believe this story is worth featuring.
All in all, thank you for your hard work and I'm happy you enjoyed reading my story as much as reviewing it :D
P.S. I apologize for that comment spam. Do you have a working link to your banner? It doesn't show up under the "support us" section.
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