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REVIEWS
정신 분석
 
 
 
HELLO PEOPLE! MTBD REVIEWS IS BACK IN TOWN YA'LL, WITH A NEW REVAMP / LAY-OUT, OF COURSE, MADE BY LYZRYAN. ISN'T THE LAY-OUT AMAZINg? NEVERTHELESS, WE'RE BACK IN BUSINESS AND WE ARE ENCOURAGING YOU TO REQUEST YET AGAIN. BELOW ARE THE FORM THAT YOU MAY WANT TO FILL UP, DEPENDING ON WHAT YOU WANT. make sure to follow the shop's rules tho.
 
 
ABOUT US
 
 


heLLO, GUYS! YEOLWHO05, THE SOLE FOUNDER OF MENTAL BREAKDOWN REVIEWS, SPEAKING HERE. FIRST OF ALL, THANK YOU FOR VISITING us. IT'S REALLY OVERWHELMING TO SEE YOUR INTEREST FOR THIS REVIEW SHOP, AS SIMPLE AS IT MIGHT BE. NEVERTHELESS, I'LL START OF WITH A SHORT INTRODUCTION. HERE IN MENTAL BREAKDOWN REVIEWS, WE DO OUR BEST TO OFFER THE BEST SERVICE THERE IS, BE IT IN REVIEWS or IN BETA-READING SERVICES.

NOW, AS WE ALL KNOW, WE ALL HAVE OUR LIVES OUT OF ASIANFANFICS, TOO, SO PLEASE REMEMBER THAT PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE. THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY MEANT TO BE RANT OR SOMETHING, BUT WE DO FEEL DISAPPOINTED AS WELL FOR NOT FINISHING your REVIEWS ON TIME. WE APOLOGIZE FOR THAT, BUT DO REMEMBER THAT WE DO HAVE OUR PERSONAL LIVES, TOO. PLUS, WE OFFER OUR SERVICES FOR FREE. THE LEAST YOU COULD DO IS TO WAIT. MAYBE TELL US TO HURRY UP AFTER A MONTH OF SO, BUT THEN AGAIN, WE DO HOPE FOR YOUR kind CONSIDERATION. AT LEAST TALK TO THE ASSIGNED REVIEWER DIRECTLY and not bash us.
 
RULES & GUIDELINES
 
 
001. YOU MUST be SUBSCRIBEd BEFORE you can file A REQUEST. THIS IS TO ASSURE YOU OF UPDATES, AND TO NOTIFY YOU WHEN YOUR REQUEST IS FINISHED.

002. UPVOTING IS EXTREMELY OPTIONAL, THOUGH WE WOULD REALLY LOVE it IF YOU DO. hopefully, this shop gets featured in the future.

003. REMEMBER TO PLACE A COMMENT AFTER SUBMITTING A FORM, AND AFTER PICKING UP YOUR REQUEST. THIS IS MANDATORY, JUST LIKE THE FIRST RULE.

004. ABSOLUTELY NO BAshING, OKAY? LEARN TO HAVE RESPECT. we are all humans here, except if you're an alien or something, and we all make mistakes, so please don't be so judgmental of others, especially to the reviewers. if you're an author, please don't expect so much, of you'll eventually be disappointed. we'll do our best though.

005. DO NOT RUSH US. WE ALSO HAVE LIVES OUtsidE OF ASIANFANFICS, YOU KNOW.

006. CREDITING IS EXTREMELY MANDATORY. MAKE SURE TO PROPERLY CREDIT US. IT WOULD BE LIKE A WAY FOR YOU TO THANK US FOR OUR FREE SERVICE. EITHER USE THE SHOP'S BANNER, OR YOU COULD SIMPLY PUT A LINK IN YOUR FOREWORD, REDIRECTING IT TO OUR SHOP'S MAIN PAGE.

007. for all the forms' passwords, you have to name a k-pop idol whose name starts with the letter "c."

do not hesitate and ask if you have any more questions, especially for those who cannot view these rules and guidelines. thank you!
EXTENDED RULES
 
 
001. STORIES THAT WILL RECEIVE A GRADE OF 90 AND ABOVE WILL GET FEATURED ON THE SHOP. PAST, FEATUREd STORIES (BEFORE THE REVAMP) WILL STILL BE INCLUDED. for people who don't intend on requesting, do take a look at the hall of fame and see if you want to read some stories from there.

002. BASHERS WILL BE PLACED ON THE HALL OF SHAME, WHERE THEIR ACCOUNTS AND THEIR BASHFUL COMMENTS WILL BE EXPOSED AS A SORT OF PUNISHMENT. it may seem a bit harsh, but let's be honest. people don't really mind blacklists these days. they take it as a simple list with not particular meaning behind it. needless to day, putting up a hall of shame shows the others of how bashers acted. A SIMPLE APOLOGY WOULD DO THE TRICK THOUGH.

003. REVIEW REQUESTORS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO CHOOSE WHOMEVER REVIEWER THEY WANT FOR THEIR STORIES. WE HAD PROHIBITED THIS BECAUSE SOME REVIEWERS HAD BEEN PILED BY A LOT OF REVIEW REQUESTS, WHILST SOME HAD NONE, HENCE THIS NEW RULE. it would be fair and just.

004. FOR YOUR STORY TO GET FEATURED, YOU MUST CHOOSE THE WHOLE RUBRIC FOR THE CRITIQUE. OTHERWISE, YOUR STORY WILL NOT BE FEATURED. as stated on the form though, you can choose whichever parts you want to get reviewed, but to be clear, you need the whole rubric and a score of 90 and above to be featured.

005. FIRST COME, FIRST SERVEd BASIS IS USED FOR THE BETA-READING SERVICES. please read the beta-reading chapter for more details.
 
FAQS
 
 
Q:.CAN I REQUEST AGAIN AFTER MY INITIAL REQUEST IS FINISHED?
A: OF COURSE YOU CAN, AS LONG AS THE SHOP IS OPEN AND ACCEPTING, YOU CAN.

q: WHAT DO I DO IF MY REQUEST IS TAKING SO LONG?
A: IF YOU ARE REALLY IN A RUSH, PLEASE DO INFORM US "NICELY." THERE'S NO NEED TO BASH AND RUSH US QUITE NEGATIVELY. JUST TELL US NICELY, OF BETTER YET, PRIVATELY MESSAGE YEOLWHO05, AND SHE WILL TALK TO THE REVIEWER. LET US REMIND YOU THAT IT IS QUITE HARD ON OUR PART AS WELL, AS WE ALSO HAVE OUR PRIVATE LIVES too.

q: wHAT DO I DO IF I'M NOT SATISFIED WITH MY REVIEW?
A: WELL, THAT'S A HARD QUESTION. OF COURSE, YOU CAN REQUEST FOR THE SAME STORY, WITH A DIFFERENT REVIEWER, BUT THEN AGAIN, IT WOULD BE BEST TO TALK TO THE REVIEWER FIRST, BECAUSE HE/SHE MIGHT'VE ONLY FORGOTTEN A FEW THINGS, YOU KNOW? PLUS, SOME REVIEWERS LIKE THEIR CRITIQUES SHORT.

Q: can i ask for a review only concerning positive things about my story?
a:
that's complete up to you, and to what the reviewer deems right. however, we cannot promise anything. reviews are not meant to be only positive. there's no such thing as a perfect story. all stories has its flaws. expect your reviews to contain both positive and negative elements.

q: i'm not comfortable with the rubric.
a:
then i guess you can choose which section you want to get reviewed. if you really don't like the rubric, then i suggest that you go and request on another shop since we really can't do anything about it, much less make a rubric for you.
 
OUR RUBRIC
 
 
taKE NOTE THAT TO BE FEATURED, YOUR STORY MUST BE REVIEWED WITH THE WHOLE RUBRIC. ANYWAY, WE WILL BE GRADING YOUR STORIES WITH THIS RUBRIC:

- STORY TITLE (5/5)
- APPEARANCE (10/10)
      POSTER AND BACKGROUND. 5/5
      LAY-OUT AND FORMATTING. 5/5
- DESCRIPTION AND FOREWORD (10/10)
- CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (15/15)
      UNITY OF THE CHARACTERS AND THEIR ACTIONS. 5/5
      EVOLUTION OF THE CHARACTERS. 5/5
      POINT OF VIEW USED. 5/5
- PLOT (35/35)
      ORIGINALITY. 5/5
      SETTING OF THE STORY. 5/5
      THEME OF THE STORY. 5/5
      FLOW AND CONSISTENCY OF EVENTS. 10/10
      CONFLICTS AND RESOLUTIONS. 10/10
- GRAMMAR AND WRITING STYLE (20/20
      CHOICE OF WORDS AND USE OF LANGUAGE. 5/5
      GRAMMARTICAL ERRORS. 5/5
      WRITING STYLE. 5/5
- OVER-ALL ENJOYMENT (5/5)

TOTAL GRADE: 100/100 = 100%
 
FORMS
 
 
REVIEW REQUEST FORM
STAFF APPLICATION FORM
BETA-READING REQUEST FORM
REQUEST LIST
 
 
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BETA-READING REQUEST STATUS:

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A/N: Reviewing of entries might take a bit longer due to my schedule. Please be more patient. Thank you!

Comments (1451)

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-TUANA-
#1
hi, can I be added as an affiliate? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1016568/
blissfulcoconuts
#2
Hi are you hiring? A reviewer?
potatounnie
#3
wait can i still apply for this contest???
[deactivated] #4
Chapter 3: Hi! I was wondering how beta readers check on the stories?
loviet
#5
hi, i wasn't sure where to contact you, but i was wondering if i could speak to you about one of the entries of your giveaway. it seems like a large portion of the oneshot was plagiarized from one chapter from my fanfic and another one (by the same author) was taken off of another story sharing website of a 7 chapter ongoing story that my friend wrote. could you PM me if you get the chance?
ojgjgofgjs
#6
there are some entries that have the forward up but not the actual chapter and the deadline has passed
MadisonMalaika
#7
Username: Madisonmalaika
Profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1018248
Story Title: Attachments
Oneshot Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/964831/attachments-supernatural-originalcharacter-interracial-ambw-jackson-got7
Genre(s): Supernatural and mild fluff
Upvoted/Subscribed: Yes!
Blogpost Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1035267
-hoodbyair
#8
Username: -hoodbyair
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/379278
Story Title: The Morning Has Yet To Come
Oneshot link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/967403
Genre: Psychological, Angst, Romance
Upvoted and Subscribed: Yup
Blog Post: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1035123
dukkuu
#9
Username: dukkuu
Profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/573014
Story Title: Refractions of a Reverie
Oneshot Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/967348
Genre(s): Angst (and a little bit of fluff)
Upvoted/Subscribed: Yes!
Blogpost link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1035083

YES I FINALLY JOINED!!!
yeolwho05
#10
For those of you who still wants to join, do it now! I will no longer be accepting entries after 12:00 NN (GMT +8:00). Have a nice day!