[Recommendation] - Histoire D'Amour

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So this story is set in the kind of olden days. The main female protagonist wraps herself around a thick blanket of depression, unwilling to allow anyone to show her the meaning of love after her mother's tragic death. During the foreword and first chapter, it shows how incredibly close they were to each other. Being an only child, it wasn't much hard work for her father to take care of her. She grows up living by her mother's tips like "Say thank you." Or "Keep your head up high!" 

When she tries to attempt to love again, the black and white world infront of her refuses to accept her, in the main female protagonists perpective. It starts off with a pretty sad scene and Im not going to spoil it for you.

(15/01/2014) - The fanfic has currently three chapters out.

-KirbyK

P.S.- Im the beta reader ;^ Luul, but I really think her story is starting off pretty well. ;) 

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I'm currently working on your review and I hope for it to be posted by Sunday. Sorry if it's a long wait. 

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TheDarkLordInHiding
#1
Do you review oneshots?
yoongis-cupcake
#2
1. Title: Broken Crayons Still Colour
2. Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/934102/broken-crayons-still-colour-angst-depression-eatingdisorder-jackson-mark-got7-markson
3. Description: Mark has an eating disorder. Jackson has his suspicions. Jackson is sworn to secrecy, but what he doesn't realise is that the decision he makes could potentially threaten Mark's life.
4. Reason: This is my first "successful" story and I would really like to gain readers by improving it! I'm asking for a review to see what I can change to improve it and gain more readers, since I want people to know they aren't alone <3
[[note: its a work im progress/incomplete, is that okay? haha <3 thank you so much!]]
dyodyopie
#3
1. Story Title: Broken Guitar String

2. Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/765552/broken-guitar-string-angst-drama-romance-tragedy-kaisoo-chanbaek

3. Mini description of story: Baekhyun and Chanyeol are happily married and their love seems so strong that it is seems indestructible. Chanyeol then got a promotion in his company and hence, he got busier. Unknowingly, he stopped giving the love and attention Baekhyun wanted hence, Baekhyun turned to someone else for love. The love Baekhyun had turned to made his marriage life with Chanyeol unspeakable.

4. Reason why you would like a review: Furslt because it is my first time writing a story and I want to recieve different thoughts on how the story is. I need to also improve on my charaterization, many reviewers told me I need to be clear. I want to improve in everything overall. LOL
bts_kimtaehyung
#4
1. Story Title : Blind Heirs

2. Link to story : https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin

3. Mini description of story : I'm bad at this otl sorry

4. Reason why you would like a review : I would like to improve:3



idek why im recommending my own story but okay:p

The author's name : bts_kimtaehyung
Story title:blind heirs
Link to the story:https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin
Why you would want us to read it. : this story will be awesome:3
overdosagexo #5
1. Story Title
包子 (Baozi)

2. Link to story
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/656260/baozi-anorexia-depression-exo-xiumin-bulimia

3. Mini description of story
It's about how Xiumin deals with anorexia and eating disorders

4. Reason why you would like a review
I would like to know what others think about my writing. I really like to write and my ideas come at random times, but I honestly do not really think I portray my ideas well. That's why I would like a review :)
eunhyuksgal
#6
1. Story Title : What Exactly Am I to You?

2. Link to story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/673172/what-exactly-am-i-to-you-angst-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-hyukjae--superjunior

3. Mini description of story : A story analyzing Eunhyuk's love life of ups and downs; with mostly downs. Donghae has been there for him since day 1, as a brother, as a best friend and unfortunately as a buddy. When Eunhyuk finally realizes Donghae's true feelings for him, he is unable to reciprocate it. This story is definitely going to be full of angst and since that's the foundation of their relationship in this story. Timeline is close to current reality.

4. Reason why you would like a review : This is my first ever proper chaptered fanfic and a pairing of the popular Eunhae. Currently still in the midst of firming up the rest of the story so reviews and feedback would be extremely useful for my story development.

Thanks a lot!
love_me_love_kpop
#7
Chapter 6: I just realized I recommended your story! Haha! I see you've been keeping shop. If it were still in mine, it would start collecting internet dust. orz
ArmyExoticBaby
#8
1. Story Title - My Heroine, My First Love

2. Link to story - http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610765/my-heroine-my-first-love-fluff-krystal-romance-exo-luhan-tao-lay

3. Mini description of story - Ever since you saved Lay from some crooks in an alley, he starts to fall in love with you. Luhan is also your lost childhood friend, and also your forgotten lover. What will happen when you get knotted in a love triangle and also fall in love with one -- or both of them?

4. Reason why you would like a review - I would like to know if I should continue writing or not since this is my first fanfic ^^ Thank you for all the effort too, it means alot to me :)
P.s- english isnt my first language
ThanhXuan
#9
Chapter 19: Thank you for the review! I'll credit you ASAP!