On the Verge

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This is going to be my first long term fanfic.

It will contain death, afterlife, love, hate, maybe , a gay relationship and drama.

Of course I can't tell for sure what's gonna happen specifically, just be aware of these things.

And enjoy~

 

 

 

Thanks to my beloved sister YuYuan for this this awesome poster!!
Ich liebe dich, wäre ich Diktator würde ich ein RIESEN Denkmal von dir erbauen lassen!!! <3 <3 <3

 

UPDATE:

Dear followers/readers of this fanfic,

it's been about five year since I started this, my first long-term fanfic, and it's been almost five years since I have updated it. I want to remind you that this story is far from being dead and that I haven't forgotten about it. It will continue, for sure! Just lend me some more of your patience. Thank you all a lot - see you soon!

Foreword

Do you believe?

In the invisible ones.

In the unbelievable worlds of your dreams…

 

They are here. They want to tell their stories.

When you close your eyes, you may see them.

Names have no meaning. They are replaceable.

Your history, your present, your future.

The story of a being. The stories of millions of beings…

Whenever you close your eyes.

Whenever you’re on the verge of oblivion.

 

They are here. Invisible.

 

Those who live and those who survive.

Those who lived and those who survived.

Every soul is a precious flower with an own color. An own shape.

Fragile like a lost child’s soul.

 

It’s okay to have fear.

It’s okay to cry.

Never regret.

Not now. Not later.

NEVER REGRET!!

Simply survive.

And enjoy until the very end…

 

So, will you believe?

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beckbe
#1
Chapter 2: This is quite scary. I feel goosebump when Taec saw someone in the mirror. Spooky. >w< But while I was reading Taec's story, I also worry about Khun too. What's happen to him? He's just disappear from the story after his dangerous work. Awww... don't make him hurt or die. T.T The story's so good. ^^ Tt is very excited and Makes me anticipate for the upcoming. Your words are also getting better. Good job. *thumb up* Thank you for good work. :D
beckbe
#2
Chapter 1: You improve a lot. So good. I love the way you describe Khun's nervous emotion. I can feel what he feel from reading and that's so real. This is such a mystery story. I can feel the atmosphere of dark and suspicious in it. Cool!!! See? I said you have a potential. kkkk BTW Taec mentioning part at the beginning is kind of emotional skip for me. It makes me wonder all the time I reading the chapter that when will Taec appear again? Since he is the first person of this story. Hope he will have a part again next chapter coz I adore his character, the lazy childish nerd guy. lol
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 1: Omo Omo Omo!!!
mein Dongseang hat endlich seine fanfiction geuppdated *____*
Und das erste kapitel ist daaaaaaaaa *rumrenn*
Moment ._. ich sollte dir wohl auf englisch kommentare schrieben damit alle sehen wie supe rbegeister ich davon bin XD

So my swiss choclat lover, dongseang.
So this my not at all forced comment *Laugh*
I really like the first chapter, though it's kidn a mean since I know more about the stories than other reader.
You know there is space to become better, but there always is, and I'm sure after chapter three you got so comfortable with writing that you finally will admit your self that it is 'purfect and till than you have me, encouraging you kkk.
I loved how you changed writing style between Taecyeon and Nichkhuns pov. You mad eit totaly obvious that both of them have really diffrent kidn of charackters.
At the begining I was a bit surprised, and had to read the jump between the poves twice, but than I understood and it really has his charm.

Nichkhun still looks a little weak in this chapter to me, so I'm locking forward to see him becoming the policemen he desires to be? Or won't he? Anyway I will wait in anticipation to look at his and your developing.
I'm really curious about the next chapter. Solet it quickly be monday again <3
Or not to quick because I have to update too O_O'
-Yuan-
#4
Awww, Ich will dann aber ein denkmal mit Cheyenne udn dir mit mir, udn ich will ein ChanKhun fantshirt anhaben XD
*kuschel*
Nein ohne scheiss ich bin sehr gerüht so einen lieben supportiven dongseang zu haben de rmich in allem unterstptzt un dder auch noch eien so coole ff erfindet wiel ich die ganze zeit über ff nagge *lach*
liebe dich <3 Rinie rin ♥
beckbe
#5
Hi there. ^^ Your forward is interesting. Wanna know more about them and the story. Fighting!!!