The Cheesy Scheme [reviewing a oneshot]

♥Cherry Blossoms {Review Shop!!}♥ (simply slow)

Title- how does it attract the readers to read your fic. ( 8% )

Foreword- does it say something about the story? ( 9% -very cheesy~)

Chapter one- that chapter is important because that's where it all begins ( 35% )

Following chapters - the rest of the chapters ( 35% )

 

Bonus points for your story ( extras )

- poster ( 5%)

- background ( 3%)

 

total : 95% :) you passed the review. :)

your story will now be in the recommended fics~

wish you luck!

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shy_rabbit
#1
username: shy_rabbit

title: strawberry ice-cream

story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/316232/strawberry-ice-cream-romance-you-jongup-bap-daehyun-bapandyou

authors: Just me
--bubbletea
#2
username: Panda_Jade143<br />
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title: Cherry Blossom Tree <br />
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story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/74863/cherry-blossom-tree-heysayjump-japanese-korean-boyfriendband<;br />
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authors: Panda_Jade143<br />
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Thank you~! I hope you can find time to review my story. <3
alexchandria512 #3
Hope you find the time to review my oneshot..<br />
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username: alexchandria512<br />
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title: Don't wait 'til it's too late<br />
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story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/60676/don-t-wait-til-it-s-too-late-shinee<;br />
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authors: alexchandria512<br />
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Thanks! :D
melody0606
#4
Just submitting my application! :D <br />
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username: melody0606<br />
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title: Last Snow<br />
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story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/19335/last-snow-korean-shinee<;br />
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authors: melody0606 (only me :))
flyingyen
#5
Hey there! Sorry to be leaving a message like this in your comments but Ravenous Temptations are hiring for more staff! We are looking for dedicated graphic designers, reviewers, writers and advertisers! So please help us out because we are overloaded with requests and lack the staff to complete them ^^;;<br />
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http://ravenous-temptations.blogspot.com
AlexaSujuFan #6
Username : AlexaSujuFan<br />
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Title : I am in love with NO OTHER beside of this GAY!!!!!!<br />
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Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/42680/i-am-in-love-with-no-other-beside-of-this-gay-comedy-romantic<;br />
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Author : AlexaSujuFan
chocobop
#7
<b> Yo Joling;) I was reading the Foreword and I was like,<br />
O_O Blacklisted? Then, I read it and, OHHHHH~ <br />
Why are you so scary here;__; lololololXD</b>
dawnrose
#8
username:joanne200969<br />
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title: June Falls <br />
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story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/49194/june-falls-khunri-kwonyuri-nichkhun-tragedy-yuri<;br />
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authors: joanne200969<br />
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username:joanne200969<br />
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title: Blame it on the ears<br />
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story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/48042/blame-it-on-the-ears-bigbang-toobin-top-wonderbang-wondergirls-yoobin<;br />
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authors: joanne200969<br />
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Both of them are one shots so it's not long. ^^<br />
Hwaiting!