Surprise at the concert

It's complicated!

 

It was a blast the concert was awesome! I was blown away because there was so many people there... The stadium was FULL i'm quite surprise because before the concert it was raining heavily.. I peeked and saw everyone at the stadium was wearing raincoats... I asked why would they rather stay in the rain just for a kpop group.... Then the rain finally stopped before the concert was just about to start. THANK GOD! Big Bang worked very hard today... After almost all the performance was done it's time for YB's and Daesung's solo performance... Everything was going as planned... Taeyang sang his part until the chorus then he suddenly stopped and said a few words
 
YB: hey guys before i start to sing the other verses i wanna invite someone who has a beautiful voice to sing with me...
 
Everyone (backstage people) freaked out! They didnt know who was he talking about..
 
YB:  yo Mimi come up here.... 
Everyone: WHAT? mimi? 
Mimi: huh?
Everyone: GO!
 
I was SHOCKED! I didnt know what to do.. Everyone asked me to go up on stage.. They gave me a mic and pushed me on stage with YB... Then we just sang the two songs... After we're done, everyone gave an applause... I was still in shocked... But i was relieved that i manage to sang the part with YB... Then we both went backstage together... And it's time for Daesung's solo performance...
 
GD: hey mims! I didnt know you can sing... You were AMAZZZZINGGG 
TOP: yeah that was the most awesome performance i ever seen.... 
Seungri: HYUNG GOOD IDEA BRINGING MIMI TO THE STAGE... she was out of this world!
Dara: *Went through the three boys and ran straight to me...* AIGOOOO MIMI AHH!! I THOUGHT YOU WILL NEVER EVER SING INFRONT OF A CROWD! You were EXTRAORDINARY!! I'm so proud of you !!
YB: hey nice performance just now... *Wink*
Mimi: thanks.... 
CL: hey cozz didnt know you can sing...
Mimi: yeah i was surprised myself..
CL: you should go for the YG audition...
Big bang: YEAH! That's a great idea! You should mimi!
Mimi: we'll see...
 
Then it was encore time... Big Bang didnt have anymore idea what to sing so they asked the fans... Then most of them demanded Fantastic Baby... Then someone shouted MIMI! well after that everyone was shouting MIMI! Everyone was surprised... 
 
Mimi: what do they want?
YB: *puts mic away* i think they want you to sing fantastic baby with us...
Mimi: no they dont...
GD: okay.. We get it... You all want Mimi to sing with us ayt?
Audience: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
Mimi: *Shocked* *my jaws opened wide..*
YB: see?
TOP: come on mimi! lets rock this stage!
Audience: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
 
We all sang Fantastic Baby like what the audience asked for.... good thing i memorise the lyrics... Then the audience wanted more.. Big bang was quite tired so they begged me to do a solo performance... I didnt any choice so i did it.. I sang koekikasete..... (yes i kinda knew some japanease) It was an awesome night... Even dara who didnt do anything was happy..she said she enjoyed watching me singing.... I can also see YB smiling when i was performing... AHHHH ALL THANKS TO HIM... THANK YOU DONG YONG BAE 
 
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Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)

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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.