Review | Banana_Dreams
Dark Desire Shop Batch 3 [CLOSED & Hiring Trailer Makers]
"Reborn" written by Banana_Dreams
Reviewed by: Bubble
Title: [5/5]
What can I say? It’s an eye-catching title which give a hint of the feeling of the story. It doesn’t give away half of the plot and stays original.
Story Poster/Background: [7/10]
Beautiful. Can I say something else?
Foreword & Description: [9/10]
Beautifully written. It made me interested in the story and I wanted to continue to know what really would happen
Plot: [15/20]
This story is about vampires. And writing about vampires a trend right now and many people does it. But you make it feel like you’re the person who has started this trend. I’m not a fan of vampire-stories myself but I like this story.
You write it very uniquely and I simply love it.
Characterization: [9/10]
The characters in this story is very similar to the way they are in real life. I like it a lot.
Originality: [3/5]
Like I said, there are a lot of stories about vampires out there. Two off because of that. But you still tend to make this story very original itself J
Flow: [8/10]
I have a problem with reviewing unfinished stories because I can’t really judge the flow of the story.
I like how this story went on. You didn’t take anything too fast or too slow.
Grammar & Spelling: [20/20]
Almost didn’t find any mistakes at all.
Overall Enjoyment: [5/5]
I liked this story a lot. It’s one of the first vampires-story after Twilight I actually tend to enjoy. Thumbs up for that one! J
Bonus points: [5/5]
Total: 86/100
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