Murder

Secret Identity

 

                                          * Flash Back*

          I was up late reading my book, when I heard footsteps gradually coming closer to my room. Who was it? I was

scared to death so I froze and listened. I knew it wasn't my parents or oppa because the footsteps were heavier and

had a clacking sound. Perhaps it was a fat man wearing tap dancing shoes? My thoughts started to flutter. I'm just a 10

year old girl, what can I possibly do if it was a thief? A kidnapper? Or worst...a .

        After a few moments I smelled something similar to smoke. What was happening? Is the house on fire? The

footsteps were gone. I tiptoed to the door and peered out. The moment I opened my door I knew my guess was right. 

Our front door was on fire. The flame was burning blue and green. Really strange right? I thought so too. But I didn't 

have time to process everything I saw. I was horrified. What should I do? Without further thoughts I screamed,"FIRE!"

Just then oppa rushed out with a wet towel in one hand, and I hugged him tightly with fear. He patted my head, gave

the wet towel to me and told me to wake up umma and appa while he called the fire department.

             "Umma! Appa!" I screamed at the top of my lungs and shook them as hard as my little arms can, but I got no

response. I paniced and attempted to wake them up again. They didn't even budge. They were still breathing, but why

are they not waking up? I couldn't understand why, of course now that I'm older I know that HE drugged them. Few

minutes later, the fire fighters arrived and the fire have already spreaded to my room. They seemed to be having a hard

time extinguishing the fire, but all I could think about was how to get my parents out of here. Before I could go back in,

a man in a yellow suit dragged me out of the house. "NOO! Let me go! I need to save my parents!" I yelled as I tried to

wriggle free from the tight grasp. "Sorry sweetie, but it is very dangerous in there. This is the worst fire I've ever seen

in my whole life, but don't worry we'll try our best to get your parents out. Now please stay with your brother here, so

you won't get hurt. Everything will be alright," the fire fighter said in a convincing tone. I KNOW something was terribly

wrong. Fifteen minutes later the men took our parents to the hospital. 

Dear God please let nothing happen to umma and appa! After waiting 20 minutes I lost hope. I ran to Inati and cried

my heart out. The doctor came out with a sad expression and said,"Sorry , I did my best."

I knew I was never going to see them EVER again.

-CRACK!-

I felt my heart break into a million of pieces as tears rapidly poured out. I felt oppa's t-shirt getting drenched in tears.

From then on I knew I would never be the same again neither would my life.

 

 

 

First chpt finally written ^^.  As of now it would really to be her.. or would it?

Waddaya think? lol 

good so far?

not too boring?

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sahl-li #1
i know him lol
SaranghaeZEA #2
lol xD <br />
ikr
heechulxjungmin
#3
lols. ok. XD<br />
yes u switch povs too much. XD<br />
"Don't talk little lady."<br />
LOL! that made me hella laugh!
ichizowee #4
it's good, but you should update faster haha XD<br />
cuz i dont remember always your story, so im gonna follow more if you update ASAP~~
SaranghaeZEA #5
whats? OC? lol i just made him up.<br />
:p<br />
ooh the fire..<br />
heechulxjungmin
#6
K.L... now he's an OC? or actual celeb?<br />
haha. kinda reminds me of u... just in a diff way. lols<br />
<br />
science much cuz the fire is blue nd green (ch.1)
becauseofyou
#7
LOVELOVE UPDATE MIN-E@!!!<3
SaranghaeZEA #8
science? lol<br />
eh lol ur's not that short..
heechulxjungmin
#9
science much? lol meimei. <br />
at least ppl dont say ur story's short. T^T lol