Chapter 1: Donghae is so selfish in this it makes me want to violently shake some sense into him (and then of course i'd apologize profusely, bc, really, violence isn't my thing). But come onnnnnnn hae! He's torturing hyuk with this doomed love affair bc he won't leave his family but also won't let hyuk leave him either. Why you so selfish hae?!? And poor hyuk keeps letting himself get broken down again and again, giving in to all of hae's needs. Come on, babe, you deserve better! And they're not young anymore; time is dwindling down and poor hyuk still has hope that they'll be together. Is that what happened in the end? And i'm not sure, but i kinda got the vibe that maybe heechul had sm feelings for hyuk. Idk. Maybe i just made that up.

Either way, this verse is so sad and hopeful and doomed all at the same time. Ugh. AMAZING.

Chapter 1: Defenitely true: real life is a ____!! >< Where our fantasy goes when we're all still babies, live happily in our dreamland...!!! EunHae ya! I wish the ____ weren't as cruel as this story to u both!!

Also v @sarah_noona: NO ACTUALLY I'M HER NUMBER ONE FAN. And in order not to start a fan war you'll just have to go along with me! :B

OMG I just read this again. ALL MY FEELS. ALL MY ING FEELS WRAPPED UP SO NEATLY ;AAAAA; and I'm on the floor splitting my guts out. This is amazing no matter how many times I read it aahhhh ninnnimmmmm ;AAAA;

Arghhhh I hate that hyukjae does this to himself but it would be horrible if they weren't together.. though they're still not together in all the senses of the world but, arghhhh
Love </3

You know, you are really one of my favourite Eunhae writers <3 Each time I see your name at the bottom of the title of a fic, I read the story because I juste KNOW it will be awesome. And it never fails <3 But tell me, they are together at the end right ? I mean, for real ? The golden ring Hae is wearing, it's for Hyuk isn't it ?
Please write more Eunhae stories pleeeeeease~ :D
Your n°1 Fan, Sarah <3

You seriously made me cry...
That story was so beautiful, so deep, so precious. There are a lot of stories on AFF, but this one is certainly one of the best I've read. All the story seems so true, as if you were seeing the future instead of a fairytale. everything is so well written it,s mindblowing...
Ahh, I'm crying right now...
Thank you for posting this story... I'm just going to sit here incoherent for the rest of the day, pass a bad night of sleep and end up zombified by your story tomorrow. That was so intense, all the emotions, all the thing you didn't say but that were there...
*Can't write anymore, I'm too incoherent because of the emotions YOU and YOUR story gave me...*

This is a little piece of ragged perfection that fell into my life...Thank you.

"They are lost somewhere along the lines I love you and I hate you."

That line alone has killed me and diminished all possibilities of bringing me back to life.

And if I wanna quote anything in the actual story, I'd probably end up copy and pasting the whole story in the comment box. ._____.

Oh my good god, you are perfect. You and your superhuman writing skill are my new otp. >.<

v Changiiiieeee omg you're even more incoherent than your usual incoherent self! xD

v Loh, I cannot agree more.

This is why I have the name 'ninja' in my twitter username. Because you are that awesome, ninjanim. >.<

v OMG! CHANG! LOL

this was brilliant!

I'm annoyed at Donghae's selfishness and I'm heartbroken for Hyukjae and ALL THESE FEELINGS I CAN'T.

"Donghae’s left hand gripping at the neck of the rice wine bottle they drink, his right resting just above Hyukjae’s heart. It beats rapidly silly, and Hyukjae knows Donghae enjoys tracing his fingertips over the place where it thumps the most, likes to have all of Hyukjae’s heart in his hands."
^ one of my favourite parts. It's like Donghae's a puppet master, able to manipulate Hyukjae in whichever way he liked, without ever caring for how Hyukjae would feel. BAJKFBFBJFB

THIS IS PERFECT. YOU ARE PERFECT.

UGH I NEED TO COMPOSE MYSELF. I really want to say something that can reflect how awed I am (HOMYGOD THIS ING PIECE OF WORK HAS MY NAME ON IT! HOMYGOD HOMYGOD /stamps all over /leaves sticky finger prints LOLOL) but ummm I honestly... I think this ate all of my coherence and vocabulary so I'm just goign to wander around and CAPSLOCK EVERYTHING BECAUSE UGH NOTHING ELSE CAN REFLECT THE MAGNITUDE OF MY ING FEELS UGH. You're like an Eunhae royalty. You're an Eunhae goddes OH WELL ARGGAHEWIFADF. Woof! Woof! /barks /doesn't know what else to do

This story makes me want to cry and laugh and hit something and make a tape and eat cookies and take a mousse shower and then die ;A; Homygod. UGH. You know I'm secretly praying that a truck can drive over Hae's family so that the two of them can be less conflicted but now that makes me sound like a mad, inappropriate deluded shipper so I won't but UGH THIS FIC MAKES THEM SOUND SO REAL IN SUCH A REAL SENSE OHMYGAH WHEN WILL I FINALLY MAKE SOME SENSE SO I CAN SHOW YOU HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS. UGH I DON'T EVEN. This is honestly the best sequel I've read to a one-shot ;A; AIHEFKJDFAF UGH. AHEFJDFAEWKFDF UGH. IHAFLDFDAF THIS UGH.
/runs
/barks
/rolls around