Goodbye Completed!

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haissa  on says about chapter 2:
it hurts T_T nice story!

Tinusska  on says:
TwT Oh god that was so sad and..my little Bummie T-T Really beautiful,I like your writing style.Good job! ^^

VisionOfPerfection  on says about chapter 2:
Awww that was so sad ):
It wasn't extremely sad to make me die, but it was enough for me tear up a little.
Poor Bummie has cancer - that would be scary if he had it in real life. ;o
That note kinda killed me though.
Well, this was great overall! <3 Your writing style is so great! <33

clockworkangel151  on says about chapter 2:
wow this is really good cant wait for the next chapter

naznew  on says:
too short..

Condemd  on says:
Hehe yaay you made other chapter! ↖(^▽^)↗ Oh god I really read this chapter with teary eyes...Key died...ಥ_ಥ *sniff*
Like I said really great and beautiful story.(｡♥‿♥｡)
Can't wait for next chapter!
But doh you stupid Sekyung. (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ ...okey I need to chill out and put my table back xD... ┬──┬◡ﾉ(° -°ﾉ)
But why don't you make it longer story? Em I don't know why but in this story would be cool OnJong pairing... (O_o)
But yeah that only my crazy imagination...(¬‿¬)
Anywhy keep going! o(≧o≦)o

Condemd  on says:
So sad... o(╥﹏╥)o I like your style. I like sad stories like this one but you should make a sequel. :)
Anywhy great story! ◕ ‿ ◕

Little_Turtle  on says:
so, did Jonghyun not know about Key's condition? this story was so good that it made me cry. that dumb dino~ I hope you can maybe put a sequel to this. ^-^

ChoiReeKim  on says:
not very good, better !
Saying this to you, sorry
but i don't mean that my stories very good too :)

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