Slaves

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Kim Jaejoong and Kim Junsu's lives were falling apart. They were evicted ...

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Foreword

The following is a story that was originally intended to be pwp (-without-plot). Because of the dire need to add a storyline and to reach an ending on my part, I have added some plot in later chapters. Be ...

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14JKSor3KHJ #1
Shinhwavee, I just followed your tumblr - rormypond. Also, I'm missing these characters a lot. I know that life happens, muse happens as it happens, and just let's not do stuff right now but indulge in our own stuff happens.

BUT could you like play some music? Watch some fancams? Some variety? Whatever gets you into the mood for these guys story. I'm really interested in knowing where they are going and how they'll gain confidence as individuals to combat the struggles that their lives. I'm just needing Junsu to heal or find help, something.

*but let's talk like I know your human*

So, how's things?

Good?

Good.

How's the weather?

Like Fall...?

Hmm, true.

So?

So...

Yep.

Uhn-huh.

Okay then.

Pip-pip and cheerio deary. Until next time.
mysara #2
Hi.
I hope you are doing just fine.
I'm really wondering whether the fic is going to be completed or not?

Well, since that fic has been updated since 2013, I hope that you can reply to my curious question.
Thank you and hope you have a nice day.
AnVocNighMa #3
Chapter 1: Haha. A devil has arrived. Finally got time to read more like courage...hehe.
14JKSor3KHJ #4
Chapter 24: This fic was not supposed to tug my heart. It was to be a pwp fic that I could just read for mindless *delicate cough* reasons. Now I'm hooked and wanting Yunjae to just stop and see that Junsu is not behaving like himself. I feel like it would take Junjin to see what Yunho can't.

Crap usually gets worst before it gets better. But seriously, how much must they smell like smex that Yunho didn't notice when Junsu came back from the 5th floor?

No matter what Yunho is always cast as-the-last to see the truth in AFF's. Babo.
14JKSor3KHJ #5
Chapter 23: Are you fraking kidding me author-nim? Sisu angst? Junsu is too too too grrrrr. Yunho, save him?
14JKSor3KHJ #6
Chapter 22: *smiles of delirious glee spread across my wholes being* They pretended to be asleep first? Awww, author-nim is a softy on the inside.
14JKSor3KHJ #7
Chapter 19: Why in the frak of AFF world am I teary eyed over the Yunjaesu dynamic of this chapter? I'm so proud of Yunho for his gentleness towards Junsu in the cold shower and I wanted to grab Jae in a squishy hug while he listened to Yunsu's love talk about Junsu's laugh. And then as Jae trailed behind them walking to the car watching Yunsu's continued 'bonding without Jae', aiiiiiish, really author-nim? What the frak? This is supposed to be a pwp fic? Grrrrr, wei am I ensnared and loving it?
14JKSor3KHJ #8
Chapter 14: I couldn't remember the rules either author-nim. Frak!

I say write the Yunho that fits the moment best.
AnVocNighMa #9
I need to read this. My battery is dying so I will do it tomorrow. It is 4:08 am so yeah.