Pt. 0

Amour
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When Dahyun was younger, she liked to picture her Church as a canvas, one that God himself had flicked His brush all over, filling it with color and light and hope and happiness. She liked to imagine that every single panel in the Church served a purpose from Him, that the beige on the walls were supposed to appear dull and that the mahogany cross at the front of the Church was crafted personally by the hands of the Lord.

Of course, as Dahyun grew older she came to realise this wasn't the case. Now, she understands that whilst the church is merely a vessel, brick and stone and cement, the interior doesn't really mean anything. It is a place of worship. A place that she has felt at home in for all of her life, even after she went away to college. There's a sentimentality in it, this place of brick and stone and cement. It's a part of her. Pastor Kim is her uncle, and her parents have frequented the Church every Sunday for the past nineteen years (Except, of course, the three consecutive Sundays that the entire family had the flu).

There is no Dahyun without this church. 

This Sunday feels different though, somehow. Dahyun can feel it the second she walks into the church. She wants to pin it down to unfamiliarity, after all this is only the second service she is attending since her return from college a week ago, but that doesn't make sense, because last week she was fine; comfortable. This feels different. There is something hanging in the air; something sweet, yet faint, like the feeling you get when you know something big is about to happen. Dahyun wonders if she is having a numinous experience, if this is God's divine presence blessing her and making her feel so... tranquil.

She joins her mother on their bench, the bench right at the front of the

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buddy_molly
#1
Chapter 2: Man, this just keeps getting better and better. I love how you showed Dahyun's inner turmoil and her inexplicable attraction towards Sana and how magnetic you made your Sana. The way you described Sana's voice through Dahyun was just WOW. I love where this is going. Bravo so far!
buddy_molly
#2
Chapter 1: Oh, this part already owns me. You write well, beautifully with a dash of humor that wins me over. You don't need to worry about the chapter being short because I think the quality shines through despite the quantity. Your style here just has that sort of impact. Kudos!
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #3
Chapter 2: Hearing every little thought that Dahyun has is so informative, especially the fact that every little thing that Sana does affects her. I think that Dahyun will find out something about Sana that will completely flip her preconceived notions about Sana right on its head, which might even change her own beliefs.

The characters and the world here are very well-established. Their personalities, character traits, and the world that feels very lived-in makes for a compelling and immersive story! The way you've written this story keeps me so invested that I'm already imagining all the possible story hooks and opportunities for character development, something that not many stories can do to me. I absolutely can't wait to find out more about these two, keep up the good work!
Samkam
#4
Chapter 2: Incredibly well written!!! I’m hooked already.
iCameFromTheStars
#5
Chapter 2: OMG OMG OMG OMG I really love this story=! <3 I've been waiting for a churchau all my life!
Twiceflexible
#6
Chapter 2: the writing is on point. this satisfactory level of narration is so good! please do continue because i am currently experiencing like sana hahaha well i have been to church off and on but when i transferred to another country, i just stopped going for a year and few months already
Tokwa2x
#7
Chapter 1: I came back to reread but it's missing. Something is missing. Or I just dreamed about this got updated since I just woke up. I'm confused. what happened?
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #8
Chapter 1: I can tell that this will be incredibly well written just from the first chapter! It'll be interesting to see what the conflict of the story will be, perhaps a religious reason that separates them or maybe time/distance when they go back to college? I'll definitely be keeping up with this one.
Samkam
#9
Chapter 1: This is amazing!!!!!