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A December story.
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Park Chorong. Clinic XXXX, near the hotel.

 

If there is one word that can describe the last 30 minutes, it is 'CRAZINESS'.

We were in the hospital waiting while Gak-oppa's wife went into labor, suddenly.

Some co-workers were being treated in emergency because of glass cuts, others had alcohol intoxication —including Lee Changsub— and a couple of children were bleeding from the nose, they were fine, even laughing.

 

Bomi was by my side, it's strange to call her by her name, it’s just one word but, I do prefer Bbom-ah.

Naeun and Eunji weren’t seen anywhere, I guess they stayed in what was left of the party.

I was so immersed in my role that I didn’t notice that the party was sinking from the beginning. 

Not saying I told you, but I did. This party wasn’t a good idea.

But if it weren’t like that, maybe I would never have met this girl with those beautiful dark brown eyes that was holding my hand at that very moment.

 

"Great way to celebrate Christmas! isn't it?" she said a bit tired.

"Actually, it looks a lot like Christmas party at my house, of course, if we remove the blood and the babies-coming" we laughed. It was true tho, people pretending and getting hurt later.

"Do you think we should prepare the emergency number at the party with your parents?" She giggled. 

I had forgotten for a moment that there was still that other party. "I hope your father does not use his 8th hapkido level on me." she continued saying.

Me too, I hope it doesn’t get out of control.

"Just in case, wear armor that day" I joked with a serious face. She laughed nervously.

 

I looked at my phone, messages from Naeun, those two were having a good time, there were still people at the party.

I realized the time, barely 14 minutes for Christmas.

Bomi got up to get some coffee for both of us. She is considerate, kind and beautiful. I couldn’t be with a better person this day.

What Changsub said was nonsense, this girl is a thousand times better.

 

Then I reminded, something. Before she could have sat down I held her wrist and leaded her to the elevator.

"U-unnie, where are we going?" I didn’t answer her question, instead, pressed the button to go to the rooftop of the clinic. "Unnieeee is hella cold outside" she cutely pouted.

"From above you can see the fireworks throughout the city. I thought it would be nice to see." I fixed her scarf, when she shows her aegyo she's irresistible.

When we reached the terrace, I felt a bit disappointed, there were some other people with the same idea. I led her aside for more privacy.

"I hadn’t give you your Christmas present yet." I pulled out the small gift from my coat.

It was a necklace with a small silver panda that I bought this afternoon after taking Hayoung to her grandparents' house.

At the shop there were necklaces with heart shapes, I don’t want her to think anything strange and that panda caught my attention, I know it's her favorite animal.

In addition, Naeun was already excited enough with the idea of ​me ​buying something for Bomi, so I bought it without thinking too much.

 

"Unnie, you shouldn’t have, it’s not necessary" she put the coffees

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Panda0619
#1
Chapter 25: I like this story, would be better if there was more description of the emotions? It's a great plot nonetheless..
And the feels for this story are even stronger because I'm reading this in Dec.. Haha
Thanks for this story! Looking forward to your other works!
ckaz99
#2
Chapter 25: The extra chapters for Hajoo and 2eun aww it was a nice touch. I particularly liked Hajoo's story! It was cute and similar to Chobom, so maybe that's why? I think I just really like the whole matchmaking thing that was going on at the same time hahaha, an excuse to spend time with each other~ but god, Chobom falling in love while pretending to be together-- I love that :D
ckaz99
#3
Chapter 21: Woo! The chapters flew by so quick before I knew it, and yes so much fluff but also slight angst :o It was done really well. The lead up to the [M] chapter was great, just all the feels~ That first HG party was certainly something, dang Yoon Bomi! And the drama that exploded, Moonsun and Huh Gak’s baby AHAHA I really liked it, descending into chaos like that as Chorong thought it might. That angst apart ahhh. But I love how everyone saw the potential of Chobom uweehee~ And after no more lying, they really went for it! With spontaneity ^^ Ahh so fun, I’ll check out the epilogues later!
ckaz99
#4
Chapter 7: I’m just gonna stop here for now and leave a comment. UWU THISH IS SHO CUTE I kennut! Squeeeeee~ Yes I’m lying in bed delaying much-needed breakfast and taking a break from writing a new story in the notes on my phone, to read this. It’s so adorable so far. That asdsdfsaad kiss ASDFDGSFAHS!! Those feelings~ they’re blooming~ and I liked that there was a talk of consent. Gosh this is so good my feels are through the roof. And I need to go now, but I’ll be back! Mark my words~~
phouse
#5
Chapter 18: how come I only read this story today?? it sit on my subscription page and left untouched T.T
so first thing first, please forgive me for I have sinned.

Now for the story, love it, I finished it in one go for it has right amount of angst/fluff/m content for me.
and last, WDYM you can't write scenes?
not so detailed scene, as you called it, has it own charm you see, it really makes our mind wonders..

anyways, yeah I like it and looking forward for your next works.
pandaredux
#6
Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Oh dear lord i pictured Chorong biting her lip before diving in for the kiss. XD
Jhigh230
#7
Chapter 25: Is it really finish now? Damn. I hope to read your future story soon!
ExoBeauty
#8
Chapter 23: Hajoo is cute, 2Eun is lovey dovey....ChoMI???