Sweet Memories

Ji Hyo's POV

inside his car on our way home i asked jong kook oppa why he kissed me in front of everyone. (by the way, he was not drunk coz he only had one shot that night)

Jong Kook: "because I want to make them officially know that we are in a relationship. are you mad at me now?"

I'm pretty sure I looked like a tomato after he said those words.

Me: "I'm not mad oppa it's just that I was surprised."

Jong Kook: "hmmm, wanna do it in front of them often?"

Me: "Are you crazy!?"

Jong Kook: "nah, i'm joking. you're so cute."

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sa_1109 #1 Dec 9, 2020 15:43:59

Chapter 1: So excited with your writing dear author, hope to see more your update and how you develop your story here .. Hwaiting ^^

spadenoace #2 Dec 22, 2017 18:11:28

Chapter 1: This is a pretty neat idea and the dialogue itself has a lot of potential! I would love to see it as an actual one shot developing this further instead of a simple drabble. Maybe we can start with the dinner ecent where JK takes the first sip of wine and we actually see the kiss happening? Or I really like the first paragraph though the shortness and rhythm of it reminds me of poetry haha so maybe it could be a flashback instead?

And another thing, it would be better to not have it as a script format (unless youre writing like a screenplay or something). Here its only two people so oncr you establish who is talking you can probbly do
"something spoken"
"A reply spoken"
Without the he said, she said if thats what youre having trouble with. And if you do write and check your spelling and capitalization! Keep writing would love to see more

ana177 #3 Dec 22, 2017 00:05:16

Chapter 1: I'm sorry, make long story to the next. I this read as message not ff's story... again i'm sorry dear... but good job to your work i'll waiting~

hyuknajae #4 Dec 21, 2017 22:03:56

Why is it so short???... ?

Mithani #5 Dec 21, 2017 21:29:08

Chapter 1: Try to make it longer

hyuknajae #6 Dec 20, 2017 20:48:59

Continue this story... ☺

nittyayu #7 Dec 20, 2017 08:36:09

Its gonna be a great story!

iamnez #8 Dec 20, 2017 07:23:12

looking forward for your story author-nim :D

Mithani #9 Dec 20, 2017 07:10:30

Update soon