Introduction

Notepaper: A Narrative Writing Guide

Notepaper: A Narrative Writing Guide

Disclaimer: This is not a definitive guide to writing. Please read the Forward for details.

 

Moon Byulyi wanted to write a book. A fully fleshed, multi-chaptered masterpiece dedicated to the greatest love of her life. She had heard stories of ancient artists creating entire plays, novels, and symphonies, and surely there was nothing more romantic than such dramatic labours of love. She had been writing songs for years, and had this not been such a cliche, she may have considered taking the easy route. But Yongsun deserved so much more than easy.

 

The trouble was...she had no clue where to start.

 

It seemed like a ridiculous idea at first, approaching the object of her mission for advice to fulfill the goals of this exact mission, but it seemed safe to assume that if she knew the rules of the game, then she could play by those rules and blow her mind. And, really, who thought more about writing than Kim Yongsun? The woman who snuck breaks from work just to tweak a couple of sentences a few more times. The woman whose eyes would light at the mention of literature, and whose written worlds could be the source of so much joy and sadness in Byulyi’s life. Byulyi wanted to give her all the worlds if they brought even a fraction of the happiness that Yongsun’s work had given her.

 

"You want me to teach you how to write?" Yongsun looked up from the notebook on her lap. She bit the eraser topping her mechanical pencil to poorly suppress a smile.

 

Byulyi, laying on her back across Yongsun’s bedroom rug, eyes to the ceiling, nodded.

 

"You write all the time, Byul. Why do you look so worried?"

 

Byulyi sat up with a sigh, and dragged herself closer to Yongsun. "Unnie," she whined, leaning into her shoulder, "It's different. I want to write a story this time. Like a book. You know this stuff better than I do. Can you help me? Please?”

 

Yongsun bit her lip. “I don't know. These things are so personal. Maybe you should try it out for yourself first.”

 

“But I want to know how you do it. I want it to be really good. Please, unnie?”

 

“I don't mind,” Yongsun said carefully. She put down her notebook, and poked Byulyi in the arm, “but...I don’t know. There isn’t just one way to do it? I don’t want you to think this is the only way to write, so it feels a little...dangerous?”

 

“Don't worry, unnie. I can think for myself.”

 

Yongsun smiled, and tucked her hair behind her ear. “I know, Byul. I just wanted to be sure.”

 

“I got it, I got it,” Byulyi replied with a chuckle.

 

“You’re gonna be cheeky, aren’t you?” Yongsun said with a grin. When Byulyi stuck the tip of her tongue out, she reached up and ruffled Byulyi's bangs. "Alright then, let's do this!”

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Daebak_Janggu #1
Chapter 6: Woah, this fic is really cool. I love it 😄
Wasp16 #2
Chapter 6: Best ending ever haha

So Good
ss0520 #3
Chapter 6: You have an interesting thought process and I love your writing style. Hope you'll continue posting on this site now and then.
girlofeternity_ss #4
Chapter 6: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1279313/6'>Editing</a></span>
Even though I've read this before, it's not a waste of time to read again.
gay4pineapples
#5
Chapter 6: OH MY GOD
i know i say this in like every comment i ever write about your works, but this is literally a piece of art
i am so in love with everything in this, from the actual advice in this from yong to byul, to the cute little looks and touches here and there (which you mentioned ;)), and how the characters were used in this (especially hyejin and wheein, and SEULGI OH GOD i actually laughed out loud (i am sure irene loved her character), but seriously, al of this is awesome
i had so much fun with the poem at the end, it was such a perfect explanation of this whole story (sorta), my favorite line of it was “she looked over my shoulder, said my story was ” bc that’s a big mood
but seriously, this is great! and the fact that you incorporated moonsun into this made it so much more enjoyable and creative, and the moral of the story is that i love you ;)))))
Emily_fv
#6
Chapter 6: I really liked it! It's a lovely story <3
wenderpul
#7
Chapter 6: I'm glad you actually finished this. It reminds me of the things I've forgotten and should've paid more attention to and also taught me new stuffs. There's a powerful line that really got me,

" Writing is an intimate, personal thing, Byul. When you shape it and grow it, it’s like a child. And when you disrespect a child constantly, well, you know."

Sometimes I get caught in what people might think as good and project this in my works, making me demotivated and I'll just keep insulting the child - my child. I know it shouldn't be the case but it's easy to forget sometimes, that despite everything, a lot of people write firstly for themselves. So thank you :)
Toddcrevan
#8
Chapter 6: So much worknfor a simple confession I LOVE IT. Very Byulyi
akiraCubos
#9
Chapter 6: Author-nim you’re really amazing.... i learned a lot in this story... and i really like how the story flows...
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Lucipaw
#10
Chapter 6: As someone reading this at 430 in the morning, all I could say is that this is amazing. The progression of the story was well thought out and you also gave a guide/advice to upcoming writers. You are amazing and thank you for this beautiful story!! :)