When The Snow Melts

Description

Title: When The Snow Melts

Author: Sherioka   

Genre: Romance, Drama

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Yamada Ryosuke x OC(Kuroyama Miliyah)

Summary: Ryosuke was a boy deeply in love, but he got a bad thought -- what if Miliyah never loved him? After all the hardwork he put on her, will all those be put to waste? He got her out of her misery time, the time where she most needed someone after the car accident. Slowly, the snow began to melt, Ryosuke's love for her recuded, filled with doubt and uneasiness. But on the day of Christmas, when the snow fully melted, he saw through his heart, he found what was lost in the snow all those time. He found out the  things and thoughts that he neglected. 

Note: This story will be in Ryosuke's POV.

Foreword

This is a oneshot for this Christmas Contest on Facebook. They don't have much rules, so I guess I'll join for fun. And for something to do now that my exam is over. This time, in this oneshot will be featuring Japanese idols. Next one will be a Korean one. Ideas pop up, and I have no idea which is better. So write them down, ask for a review and we'll know! xD The best one gets to join the comp.  

Visit Peachy Review Request Shop for a Christmas Contest, too! The one I'm entering first, is a locked community on Facebook, so I won't share the link. 

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Characters Profile♥

Kuroyama Miliyah: 

Gotten into a car accident a year ago on Christmas, making her waist down body paralyzed.

She met Ryosuke at the hospital and he helped her out of her depression. 

They became close friends, since Miliyah only had him, her parents were both in the country side. She was alone. 

She's not really pretty, but likes to apply makeup to cover up the flaws of herself. Despite that, she has a cute smile. 

Usually shy and quiet, but sometimes funny and clumsy. Loves swimming, but doesn't have a clear mind, not postive in things.

 

Yamada Ryosuke:

Became friends with Miliyah a year ago on Christmas. He was visiting the hospital to take his daily headache meds when he met her.

Has headaches from pressure, but ever since meeting Miliyah, love occupied his thoughts and his condition was suprisingly better.

He's a romantic type of guy, always there for someone he loves. And that someone, is Miliyah. 

Has a hobby of cooking and taking care of people, a boyfriend everyone wants. He's confident and has a great personality.  

Meeting Miliyah changed his personality completely. He wasn't what he use to be before. Should that be a good thing, or not?

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When the snow fully melted,

he saw through his heart,

he saw through the doubts from the thick layer of snow.

 

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Thanks to kimxbb @ The Angelically Dreamt for the amazing poster! :) It has a Christmas feel to it! I love it. 

Thanks to PikachuSneeze @ PikachuSneeze's Revew Shop for the honest review. Score: 87

Review001. 

Thanks to Chindee @ Cotton Hearts Review Corner for the honest review! Score:74

Review002.

Thanks to Shinhyunae @ M&M Review Store for the honest review! Score: 62 

Review003.

Thanks to my-flaming-charisma @ Mochi Mochi Review for the honest review! Score: 69

Review004.

Average Value: 87+74+62+69/4=73

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nana0730
#1
Chapter 1: This is really a amazing story. Just because people are in wheelchairs doesn't mean they can't have a love life as well. Ryo-chan showed to us that love is stronger than appearances.
I really liked this one ^_^
lilymilktea #2
your review is done, it's in the last chapter. :) http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/99286/m-m-review-store-apply-girlgroup-kpop-request-review-boyband-advertise<;br />
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Do leave a comment once received, thanks! ^^
Sherioka
#3
Aww, thank you! :D<br />
After re-checking the story, I found out so many typos so I changed them quickly! -SAFE-<br />
Haha <3
Candyy
#4
This is really sweet. :)<3 It got me in the Christmas spirit.