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You're too Beautiful to Kill (Under construction: FIRST CHAPTER IS DONE EDITING)

Hello, sorry to those that open this thinking it was an update on the story. But I realize there is a lot of error in my story, plot line wise as well as character development. So I am gonna rewrite some parts of the chapters so that it will flow better and make more sense. I never really have written stories before that are as complex as this one I am trying to write right now and I realize I was very unorganized writing this so apologies in advance!

Please bear with me and my slow pace editing skills I really like this story and I have so many ideas for this so I really don’t want to give up on this one but in order for me to have more motivation I have to set down a better foundation because I am always confused on what direction I should take the got7 members. 

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NuOppa
#1
please update :^)
JinyoungsMark #2
Chapter 10: Will wait patiently for ur update and editing ..tc by then ;)
Kcrescent_V
#3
Chapter 9: I love Jackson the frog!!!!!! Poor Bambam!!! It would be fun to see Jackson trying to court Bambam! I wonder what role Youngjae would play and how Jaebum will appear (if you planning to introduce them) I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And to need to thank me! I love your story and early wait for the update!
jiminiemarktuan
#4
Chapter 9: Another thing though.

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ONLY HAVE LIKE 100+ SUBSCRIBERS!! -_-)/ THIS FIC IS BEAUTIFUL. YOU DESERVE MORE SUBS!!
jiminiemarktuan
#5
Chapter 9: Ahhh! I just read this fanfic, and wow! Even though the idea was adapted, the whole story exudes 'originality' bc of your creativity in the characters' personality xD update soon love xoxo! Can't wait!
JinyoungsMark #6
Chapter 9: Aww..jackbam in progress. XD
Kcrescent_V
#7
Update soon!!! It's been long time aurthormin! Waiting for the update
Kcrescent_V
#8
Update the story pweeeeeasss!!!!!
Kyungsoo28143
#9
Chapter 8: Woah i love this fantasy something story!!! I normally dont like this kinds of stories but im loving this one!!! Wahhh update soon
sanum88 #10
Chapter 8: Yes!welcomeback!
I'm happy to read this story.
Thanks for update in your busy time,I'll be waiting next chapter^^