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Loving You Hurts A Thousand Times More Completed!
by ChoomNami
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abuse
joonmir
mblaq
seungho
thunder
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Joon, Mir, Seungho, G.O. Thunder
Description
Joon and Mir are in an abusive relationship. Of course it started out good but things came crashing down when Mir came back from vacation. Joon is suddenly acting weird towards Mir. It started with a little flick to the forehead, but the anger he took out on Mir grew.
Foreword
"Hyung, please don't hit me," Mir begged.
"You deserve to be taught a lesson. You need to learn better," Joon said.
Joon raised his hand fixing to hit Mir. He saw tears coming from Mir's eyes. Joon closed his eyes and hit Mir on the cheek. He used enough force to make Mir fall backwards on to the bed.
"Hyung," Mir said crying.
"Mir, I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to hit you, I swear," Joon said.
Joon walked over to Mir who was whimpering because he was scared. Joon wrapped his arms around Mir and kissed the red mark where he hit him. Mir whimpered even more. Mir was shaking from being scared. Joon rubbed his hand up and down on Mir's back trying to calm him down.
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Doongie_lover on says about chapter 55:
So sad about it ending like this but solo nice
BJ_VIP_Lover27 on says about chapter 55:
That was Sooooooooo Freaking Gooooooood! I loved it. Sweet ending!
BJ_VIP_Lover27 on says about chapter 55:
That was Sooooooooo Freaking Gooooooood! I loved it. Sweet ending!
Jaejoonginyourbed on says:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO its over T_T WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
MIRaclebiased on says:
It's over... T.T I hate that its ova but it was a great ending! I loved the story throughout all the chapters, no matter how many tears I shed it always makes me smile in the end ^^ love you ^^~
YeCy_de_kim on says:
Omo...I don't know what to say...yeah this is really over...:'(
I really loved youre story since the very first chapter! And it wasn't a crappy ending it was awesome :33
Of course I have to thank you for such a good story like this!!!
So I'll waiting for another great story from you :)
¨Love ya'
*hugs
KaishkaKo on says:
I can't believe... it's....it's over
*bursts into tears*
Aish I have become so emotionally attached to your story that I can hardly even stand it! I love all of your characters and I am just so happy that everyone ended up alright <3 I love this so much, thank you for writing it.
HAFSITTAJOONIE on says:
ooooohhhhhh thank you for updating thisssss
leehongkifan1234 on says:
:( I love this.... Good luck with school.... I'm gonna be in 8th grade (supposed to be 9th but my mom held me back) and I am terrified.
KaishkaKo on says:
AHHHH no not the ending!!! kekeke I'm just happy that everyone is happy! Originally I came here for the JooMi, because I am a JooMi _____, and I just wanted them to end up happy. Now I have become attached to the characters and I want all of them to be happies!!!
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