Written by : Apoptosis
Title : Blinded by Yoo
Characters : Jung Daehyun & Yoo Youngjae
Genre : Comedy - Romance - Daejae
Ratings : ★★★★

REVIEW ;

It started with Daehyun distracted Youngjae in 6AM just because of his broken spectacles. Daehyun kept begging for Youngjae's help from clothes to lenses. The funny parts are when Youngjae troll Daehyun and when Daehyun kept mistaken the unanimated objects as Youngjae because of his bad eye sights. This one-shot highlighted the Daejae's cute and funny friendship from the beginning til the end.

I love how the author make me giggles and laughing while reading this one-shot. The way authornim portrayed Youngjae and Daehyun are just perfect. I really love their silly and funny behavior...

Daehyun and Youngjae were struggling to find lenses, but what'll be the end? Are they succeeded? Or not? Please read it as soon as possible. I guarantee you'll love it like i do.

Keep up a great work Apoptosis!

MARKING ;

• TITLE : 10/10
  - "YOO" replaced "YOU", i like it so much.
   
• FOREWORD & DESCRIPTION : 5/10
  - It's short but nice ;)
   
• CHARACTERS : 15/20
  Youngjae : Grumpy, troll
  Daehyun : Silly, adorable
  I love their characters. Good job!
   
• LAYOUT/POSTER/BACKGROUND : -/10
  - You got nothing there ;)
   
• STORYLINE : 20/25
  - Very nice. Almost perfect. You miss 5 more points because you kinda rush the end of the one-shot. Overall you're doing great.
   
• ENJOYMENT : 25/25
  - Full mark for ya because i really enjoy it! Congrats! :)

TOTAL : 75/100

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