Should I change the story?

  • A) Should I do some editing because Ara is pregnant way to fast?   (61 votes)
  • B) Should I keep the story as is.   (92 votes)
  • C) Question A(This will make the story way more longer)   (11 votes)
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Sherry_al_z #1
This thing happened to fast she needs at least one month to notice that she's pregnant
bellarose #2
atleast edit the last two chapter as like a 2 month later. nobody knows they are pregnat after two days of having . neither do they get pregnancy symptoms or hunger , vomiting or tighter clothes. 2 months makes more sense with morning sickness noticing she is eating more and her clothes are seeming a little smaller not by alot but a little. the most noticaeable will be sickness and rating along with mood swings.
kanya_osh
#3
The pregnancy symptomps wont show up at least on 3 weeks. You should do research first.
linswue #4
took 3 or 4 months for pregnancy showup
within 3-4 month anything can happen
such jealousy, love, family problems, fights between friends
hope this can heips good luck author-nim
gulagulakapas #5
they just have two days ago how come she get pregnant? plz do some editing authornim
-KekeMato-
#6
I just don't really want her too feel too much pain (both physically and emotionally) too quickly.. I mean she got preggy too fast and I dunno about Kai because he won't mature that quickly to love her and protect her..
delightingKAI #7
just continue with tthe story aunim its great alrd and if u change it u will think and type agaim from the start
kiss_xander23
#8
it's not that she became pregnant too fast it's that she found out too fast and the symptoms don't happen that fast.