I am planning to edit this story a little bit so, I am giving you folks a choice either

  • A) The reader as - You were walking passed....   (0 votes)
  • B) The reader as - I was walking passed...   (7 votes)
  • C) The reader as - She was walking passed ...   (3 votes)
  • D) Up to you! / POV   (6 votes)
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