Chapter 57: omg i can't express how much of a masterpiece this story is, i just had to comment. your writing style is <3
honestly, i remember reading this waaaay back but i totally forgot about it until i stumbled upon it a few days ago and decided to re-read. best decision ever.
p.s really random but i'm a er for stories on side characters so a story on sehun and byul would be omgggg ahxbankamnsqzsk
Chapter 85: holy i started reading this in the morning and i just finished now . idont usually like war type fanfics but this is truly amazzinnggffgggggg. ajddnsjdjd yessssss fav <333
Chapter 80: I feel sorry for baekhyun, for everything he was done. I know he is wrong in the first place, but in the end.. maybe he is just too scared to be alone. Too scared to have no one in his life. He is one of a kind tbh.. but maybe in wrong time and wrong place.
Chapter 85: one of the most memorable ff i have ever read. it's simply wonderful and the ending is just ..... at loss for words. i loved it. thanking the author for such a nice treat.
Chapter 85: If there is a story on this site that I had to choose to reread again and again, hands down I'd choose this story. Everything about it is just so beautiful! I cry at the sad parts, smile at the fluff, and everything is just so raw in this - I love it! Thank you so much for creating such a masterpiece! :D
Chapter 85: So, I'm finally done with reading this story! I have to say my favourite character of all time is Sehun, no matter how cute both Jongin and So Eun are. It's so admirable of him to live only for Jongin, even though Jongin did save his life. He can be the goofiest sometimes but he always straightens up for Jongin. I think I almost cried when Sehun was telling So Eun how he couldn't find him, it was almost like a lost boy who couldn't find his mother or something alone those lines.
The best part of the story is that you can't pinpoint and label anyone as good or bad blatantly. They all have their faults, but you can't say that they're all bad, including all the minor characters. (Still kind of secretly loathe Junmyeon though) I love how you gave all of them personalities and some purpose to be in the story. I would've never expected Hara to risk her life to help Jongin, nor for the snarky stable boy to take Jongin in, or for Mdm Jin to warm up to So Eun. I'm glad I gave this story a chance, because I clearly remember steering clear of it because it was a war!au and I have enough pain in my life to want to avoid it hahaha.
Chapter 85: PLEASE im begging you. Please write a sequel about their life together after the reunion. I would love to read more about their happy ending!
Chapter 74: i was listening to sam smith's too good at goodbyes before reading this chapter and i cRIED. it perfectly suits the situation so eun is in this chapter : ( my eyes are swollen already but as much as it hURTS, i love it. it makes me feel half of what so eun must be feeling with all the misfortune that has happened with her
Chapter 86: Ok here goes my inner self writing a huge of a comment again , first of all WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL IS THIS ??!!!! loved every letter from this story , the story is unfair cant even breathe . they were harmed alot and justice did them no right , i cried alooooot and baekhyun death was really heartbreaking he doesnt deserve this but its war and nothing could be done , her brother killed me why !! thats really unfair jist because of people's greed innocent people had to die ... the part he talked while dying with jongin broke my heart , it doesnt matter he the enemy as long as his only family is fine , till the last intake of breath he thought of her .... sehun was perfectly perfect his character and him as a whole was perfect , liked his loyalty to his only friend . suho pissed me off at times but when i think about it he also was treated badly , amd he did things that be beleived are the right for his own and he succed in that but it also harmed him and his pride id killing him ... hara was naive but a sweetheart she loved jongin that she sacrfied herself for him to live thats brave and nice from her point ... and last and not least jongin amd so eun they are perfect for each other , its amazing how they click and are like each other , best couple on AFF for real ... i liked your way of writing and it amaze me how you know all this even if you used google it still hard to obtain informations as these in the story there is no doubt that you won the first place with story beacuse damn how can you not be a famous writer by now , i will start collage amd i will start studying english language amd litearture this year amd this story came in it time like i proved to muself why i love writing and books its amazing like really i cant even show how amazed i am right now this story took to places , ugghh i even told my mother about it and i never ever lile never did this before and i made my frimed an account just so can read it , your qoutes and books u used in this story are perfect and your writing is PERFECT , congrates in winning sorry for being late but you know what they say " what comes last is the best" im going to read this story all over again because im dying right here , you should publish it and make it a movie please doooo , you cant leave it like this i will buy your books amd watch your movies just do it you are the best ,, fighting you are the best ^^ ~~~~~
Chapter 65: As a silent reader in AFF, I didnt get to collect many karma points. But your story triggerd me to comments several times here to show how much I value this masterpiece. And now I have enough karrma points to upvote, this masterpiece deserves to honour my first Upvote. Thank you for this beautiful story
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