Chapter 21: personally I liked how u portrayed the OC as a loyal BFF cuz honestly I'd put friendship of years over boyfriends anytime ...realistic...thanx for credibility and nit trying to romanticize everything
Chapter 28: What with you and your teacher-student story? I read some of your baekhyun ff, and he always be a teacher (not always, but too often). Its not like i dont like it, i like it.. Too much. I like the way you build your story. But, its one of your fantasy? That your teacher is your bae? Cos, if yes, i know how that feel lol
Chapter 28: I'm deeply amazed at this story. Well, beside the romance and fluffy things, this story surprisingly encouraged me as a student. You know what, I'm in the middle of the road and so confused which major to choose. Then you come up with those inspiring sentences that I'm so glad to have read those. Probably this is the best story I've ever read, even though Baekhyun is not my bias and so on. I couldn't imagine how a story, your story, could awaken the spirit of my life to strive for the better. To inspire me on no matter which major I choose, the most important thing is I could dedicate myself into that, like Baekhyun (well not in a workaholic term but you know that), or when I got bad grades, to not giving up like the OC.
And for the vocabulary of this story, I would give 95/100. Fantastic, I must say. How you describe things so beautifully and I love it to bits. Gonna read other story of yours!
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