Chapter 84: Yifan is so frikin loaded 0___0 dayemmmm. But nawwwww hes building a personalized house for yixing and him~ that is adorable >_< kray is sweet as always and ahaha jongdae was cute not letting suho know. the platonic friendship between baekchen was also sweet and its nice to see relationships other than love in the story~
Hope you get well soon and take your time authornims, we'll wait for you~
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Chapter 84: Aaaaaaah a house!!!! I was wondering...(I thought it might've an engagement ring lol) Annnd Shiiiiiiit lil fanfan is loaded!!! (and what a great way to confess your love. This is now the standard for me. Don't even come onto me unless you have the blueprints for my dream house. )
I hope you're doing okay. If work is too much, you really must tell someone. Don't minimize your pain with a brave face. I look forward to the next update but seriously, take your time and focus on your health.
Chapter 83: Chapter 82: I'm breaking my rule by commenting half way through a story, and not waiting for the end, but dammit, this was cute as hell!!! It was adorable how Tao totally fell for the prospects of having children with Minnie after hearing about Hyungwon's sad, but ultimately bloody cute story, and watching the way Hakyeon absolutely dotes on him. I can defo see Tao and Xiu being great parents to a little cutie. Tao would probably spoil them rotten whilst Xiu would be the face of authority. Hehe >\\\<
Can't wait to see what you guys have in store for all your characters and plot lines. I've been really enjoying reading this so far, and I'm one for writing massive comments at the end of fics I've partically enjoyed. It's probably no surprise, but you should expect one or two >\\\\\<
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Chapter 81: aaaw this was cute. And so was that drawing, so adorable!
If the back story doesn't feature the main members then I'm very curious to why it needs to be in the story...does it further the plot in any way? If so then maybe it's best to bring it out naturally as you write (whether that's a double update or an extra long chapter I guess it's up to you thought I do have a preference for long chapters) if it isn't necessary to the plot then maybe it'd be better as it's own side story.
Chapter 81: Hmmm... this is a tough decision. I think, personally, it would be best to have a double update. This way, you wouldn't have to stress yourself about writing that much more and you could split it up to make it easier. I don't think I explained that very well XD Anyeay, it's completely up to you. :)
Great chapter, btw.
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