Chapter 63: I was going to move straight on to reading Blood Bound when I finished this this evening, but it's going to have to wait until tomorrow. I can't move straight on after that! I had multiple different potential endings in my mind, but that was not one of them. I was not prepared!! *cries*
Incredibly well written and immersive though, even if I am joining the boat a few years late... '^^
Chapter 42: Awww never mind i take back what i said about semi being overbearing. She really cares about jaehwan and doesnt want him to do too much. She just is being realistic about the costs of it. Also having luhan in the house is so fun because he comments on the family is hilarious
Chapter 41: Laughed as hard as i could without waking up my dogs (i actually sleep on their bed sometimes since they use my old matress). And jaehwan wanting to do ballet is so pure and squishy. Semi means well but sometimes parents can be a bit overbearing
Chapter 39: Again another little detail that made the chapter 10x better. Jongin casually mentioning camp with sehun cleared all questions about how sehun could do all that survival stuff. Flashback to semi curling up next to minseok when weiyi scoots next to sehun.
(Little tiny thing to fix- sehun mentions in an earlier chapter that he couldnt grab sleeping bags but its mentioned here. its a small mistake i barely noticed)
Chapter 38: Luhans baby face makes me forget hes like 35 or something in this fic and it just really weirded me out for a sec. Also poor weiyi. I sprained my knee (didnt know that was possible) a few days ago and couldnt walk. Hiking in the forest while thugs are looking for me would scare the f out of me
Chapter 37: The feels hit me like a truck. One moment im cackling over luhans interaction with the kids the next im tearing up because luhans situation is so tough and because he's experiencing such large amounts of kindness. Also jaehwan is savage
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