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yehet_pcy #1
Chapter 10: IF theres ever a sequel or epilogue to this i would love to read it, but i cant help but say that i think it's perfect the way you ended it. it's open and hopeful-- but gives for interpretation on your readers dependin on what we want to happen. maybe i want kyungsoi to die right after kai says the first hi. maybe i want suho to get sued for letting his patient go. maybe i want kai to suddenly remember everything and still want kyungsoo back. maybe they both live and this time kyungsoo really doesnt leave him. maybe kai wont remember kyungsoo but hell remember taemin and fall back in love with him. maybe kai falls back into depression and actuall kills himself this time. maybe everyone gets a happy ending with your hinted pairings. maybe everything in this fic ends well, or maybe it doesnt.
but the fact still remains that i was so emotional reading this that i had to stop for breaths at times, that i had to scroll faster out of excitement for what was to happen next, that i just kept on clicking on the next chapter button even though i said i wanted to comment on each chapter.
anyway thank you so much for writing and reading this fic. this is i think the first fic of yours that ive read and i look forward to reading the rest of your fics. hehe 2/2
yehet_pcy #2
Chapter 10: Well this fic has me all sorts of breathless myself.... and a little bit heartless.... and a little bit hopeless..... BUT HOPEFUL AT THE SAME TIME????
i want to say a lot but i dont think i can. im speechless..... if i had to tell you one thing though itd be that i loved this fic and it was well-written. i think the time skips or flashbacks or whatever style you used was effective and made for an even more emotional reading experience. it was more dramatic and heart-gripping that way, yes? speaking of heart gripping i could honest to god swear that i literally felt my chest ache quite a few times reading this fic, i mean seriously, i felt it physically i sWEAR. but that happens when i read fics that really get to me so please take that as a compliment. 1/2
Tania108 #3
Chapter 10: Aaaaaahhhhhhhh
AAAAAHHHHHHHH
This is amazing
Anived #4
Chapter 10: Where is the epilogue...
Anived #5
Chapter 10: Where is the epilogue...
sanscherif
#6
Chapter 10: Trust me when I say that I was /this/ close to throwing my tablet across the room when I read those last few lines, Author-nim. Damn. I wish you could have drawn out Kyungsoo's vacation a bit more to give a more natural feel of how Jongin and him eased their way into their relationship, just to limit the italics and the timeskips. There were times that it wasn't easy for me to differentiate Luhan and Minseok's voices as well. But still, this was a good attempt at Kaisoo, considering that it was your first. :) It was really memorable, I'll give you that. :)

I'm in my second year of Medicine, as well. And I'd just like to share with you that there is actually a condition referred to as the broken-heart syndrome (Takotsubo cardiomyopathy), where the apical portion of the left ventricle balloons, due to the patient experiencing high levels of emotional stress. Looking forward to the epilogue and to reading your next Kaisoo works! :)
moonlightprays #7
Chapter 10: Oh god the ending of this chapter killed me im in tears gdi. Cant wait for the epilogue. Thanks for this beautiful fic author.
minsoph74
#8
Chapter 10: Gosh, why is this so beautiful! I wanted to be at least a little angry about the amnesia but it was so tastefully done. Wonderfully written!!!
KaiOlly
#9
Chapter 10: Oh my goodness!! It ended already!!! It's such a relief knowing that kaisoo is still on and that the moment Kyungsoo decided to drop by was when Jongin had if not fully,half remembered who he was. I like how simple this FF turns out to be... for gods sake it's so short that it's maddening but at the same time satisfying. It doesn't contain too much drama for a such a short FF making it a decent read and a page turner . I can't believe that I got addicted to this that I'm willing to stay up to finish this ... That's why I'm saying that this FF is one of the best! I like ur ending but like always I have my own ending that I wished for...still, I'm looking forward to ur said epilogue! I like the characters in this story especially the goofy nurse trio! Hahahah thx authornim! And congrats and gudluck! (PS: flipflop ;p I'd be sure to make a drop at ur best friends')
KaiOlly
#10
Chapter 7: Oh god he's starting to remember
KaiOlly
#11
Chapter 6: Is Kyungsoo fired? Noooo T.T
KaiOlly
#12
Chapter 3: Oh oh oh !!! So zero! Nothing to remember at all !
KaiOlly
#13
Chapter 2: Oh no.... Kai will cry and get depressed
Kyungcycle1 #14
Chapter 10: Epilogue plzzz!!!
keydemons
#15
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD WHERES THE EPILOGUEEEEEEE
IM ABSOLUTELY CRYING RIGHT NOW CUZ OMG KAISOO MY HEART HURTS
IM FEELING LIKE A LIL PIECE OF
SPMEONE HELP ME
THEYRE SO LOVEABLE //CRY// (T ^ T)
HE REMEMBERSJSNSNSMSKAJAJAKSNSKSKSKS OMG
Komalshah98 #16
Chapter 10: I literally cried the during the whole chapter. It was so good. I love the chanbaekdae trio they're so funny. Epilogue? Pretty please?
Otoyaittoki #17
Chapter 10: GUURRRLLLL YOU GOT ME CRYIN ON THAT FUVKING CLIFFHANGER /cries/
Please! I'm begging you! Please update the sequel! I'm crying cuz I can't! /sobs/
soo-exoxo #18
Chapter 10: me holy guac. It's 4.38 am here where I am. Basically read the whole thing in one go. Soooo gooood! I need mooooorrrree. Pls?
Loganlock
#19
Chapter 10: Awesome. The feels,man. The feels! Hope there's still have the continues of this. Good job author n keep up the great works<3