Chapter 50: I would like to thank you for this wonderful and amazing story. The pace of this story was absolutely perfect! The plot progress and the character development, everything! In every bad situation you put in the story, you solved it with reasonable explanations. You made it realistic, and not a way that makes you think afterwards if it's possible.
I really like how you described the setting and the characters with good descriptions. Not to vague for it to be too fast, and not too descriptive for it to be tiring.
About the plot progress I mentioned earlier.
I love your writing style so much. From when Chanyeol and Baekhyun had nothing to almost everything! You took your time to show us that not everything will be delivered on a silver plate, and you have to work hard for it. Because everything will come with obstacles, just know that it's going to be okay, and it will be worth it in the end.
I also like how you described Chanyeol's depression in the chapters. I knew he had depression before he admitted it, because nobody is perfect and the way Chanyeol was going, I knew he was going to break sooner or later. The way you handled it was lovely. It's okay to ask for help, and it's okay to share your problems. Never think you're a burden because everyone is willing to help.
I really liked the side characters too. They had their share throughout the story, not that "oh they have played their part, time to vanish and never hear from them again". Even though they were side characters, you treated them with just enough respect and spotlight as the main characters. They had their parts, but you reminded us that they are side characters from time to time, and I appreciate that.
Thank you again for this story. Even though I read it a little bit late, I really enjoyed it, and I will always remember it.
Chapter 50: So I just found out this fic a couple of days ago and barely finished it today. I know, I am so late, but still, I wanna give the appreciation you deserve （＾ω＾）
1. Thank you so much for making a fic that so much make senses. This is how the world truly works: frustration, dishonesty, unplanned things. But all human will making do somehow. And I truly apreciated it!
2. I could related so much in many ways, about being a student with loads of burden. About job seeking and the desperation of living normally. About not telling other people we've been struggling to not putting them concerned. And it was so beautifully written
3. Thank you for encouraging people to get a psychological therapist if needed to. And it is okay to not okay. And to talk to someone when we need to. And to honest about our feeling and anxiety. It helps. Really.
4. Thank you for using so much correct term in psychology, even the pregnancy cycle, and other medical term. It's nice to see some people use it in the right way. I've been wondering if you are majoring in psychology actually.
5. Reading this, I really are concerned because the real park chanyeol also used to have sadness bottled up inside him. But slightly relieved because knew at least he doesnt let anger bottled up too. I really hope he will be okay with all the hings he's been through :))
6. Thank you for picturing their relationship as a genuine, platonic friendship. And how you make it so realistic. Being friends doesnt mean you have to know everything. You told something to someone and other thing to another. Being for each other when needed is the key to last long friendship, and you portray it so beautifully for exo to have done that. It feel so real, and I hope they are just happy as they are now.
7. Aren't all of us just jongdae? Me too, had those difficulties adjust with adults life. In fact, I still do. And yeah, we are all kids by heart and that chapter with jongdae really make me reflect on my own life, what do I wanna do with life. And thanks for that.
8. All the chapter with chanyeol's mom really moved me to tears. I'm glad you make those. It is important to not have any grudges. And it is important to not just being a good father, but good son as well. I think, as we grow up, we forgot that our parents grow up as well. And that's nice, reading those.
9. Lastly, thank you for writing all of these in such beautiful writing! It really make me looking back at my life. You penned it gracefully and I am forever thankful to have read such masterpiece.
There, thank you for read until these last words. Please be happy ^^
Chapter 17: I normally hate cheating so much and would never read even a little part of it but i kept reading this part in this ff. Chanyeol never meant to cheat Baekhyun and Baekhyun, he was mad and he wanted a revenge. He wanted Chanyeol to feel what he felt and he wanted to relief stress so he met Kang joon and had with him. The idea of Baek having or those kind of inappropriate physical interactions with other men or women than Chanyeol makes me furious and it did. I cried and i cursed them both for keep making mistakes. Cuz in the end, both of them got hurt as everyone else. But then Chanyeol didn't give up and was willing to chase after Baekhyun and ask for forgiveness. I love that about him and as for Baekhyun, he was oblivious of the fact that he didnt love Kang joon like he loves Chanyeol. He loves Kabg joon, yes. But the love is different. He loves Chanyeol in a romantic way while he loves KANG JOON in a friendly way like he loves his other friends. In the end, he realized it and choose Chanyeol. I am very happy of that cuz no one will have to suffer anymore and i wont have to be furious everytime Baek and Kang joon did those lovey dovey things. Their love survived in the end and they will be a family again with Mina as their child. You don't know how happy i am for that.
I swear, this is one of the best mpreg ffs i have ever read. It's so beautifully written and chanbaek just struggling with their first child and the emotional rollercoaster ride of emotions and how they still struggle after that and then it all finally came to an end and no matter what, they never left one another behind and always worked tgt. Their love for each other and their love and care for their children .... I just cried through the ff. I am so happy that i found this ff and that you decided to share this masterpiece with us. Thank you so much author nim
Chapter 50: oh my god. i love this story so much. i love how you conveyed chanbaek's feelings throughout the story. and i never felt so attached to a story before haha. such domestic feels.
i wish someday you could write something about teenage jaxo though ahahaha
Chapter 11: Greetings dear author, new reader here. I cant help the urge to comment or more like venture my frustration on this chapter. The whole Chanyeol cheating on Baekhyun really pissed me off for reason i dont even know. Maybe im feeling rather emotional right now cause im deeply into this story so yeah credit to you for that :)) Its past midnight here and i barely can resist the need to shout my anger out. Anyway im holding on to your a/n for a happy ending for the both of them and off i go to the next chapter. Sorry for this, i just cant help it
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