Chapter 36: ......YIXING TURNING INTO A DRAGON SHOCKED ME I Had to reread because I was like did I read that right ?? I'm so excited for next chapter to see all the stuff thats gonna go down omg and jongin trying to get them to separate from everyone else i understand what hes saying i guess but i got my eyes on you jongin
Chapter 34: I'm finally caught up with this fic after two weeks but omg do I love this fic esp since Xiuhan and Suchen are involved and i love those two ships n I love Dragon Age too. I was so excited to read this fic when i found it. ( I even started replaying Origins after a few chapters n made a elf hunter baekhyun lol. ) But anyways thank you for writing this and I can't wait for the next chapter !
Chapter 2: I smiled so much reading this and it's only been a chapter so far. Ah it's been a while since I read a fantasy adventure and this one feels great to read so far. I can't wait to catch up with the rest. The second Xiumin's dog attacked him instead of Luhan hehehe I knew that this would be a treat. I'm really excited to read the next now.
Chapter 34: I can't stop smiling for this update because this is the first notif I see right after waking up and this is so so good because a part of it is JD's POV and what a way to open the chapter with action [basically just me being biased]. Woke me up tbvh. And that hand holding at the end of his POV! I'm such a trash I'm so sorry. I don't know if you'll be using the element (dreamless sleep) in the future chapters and via Suho's POV... wait. Wait. I have to re-read a few chapters because I have a feeling that Suho actually dreams...? Anyway, still looking forward to any suchen development no matter how subtle they are.
The more revelation there is for Kyungsoo's character here the more he becomes relatable in a way that he becomes more human... I don't know how to explain it. I really need to re-read this from the beginning and I'm sorry if I haven't left comments in the past few chapters as I read mostly via mobile now and most of the time commenting/sending a response fails on me. Not sure if it's site-related or mobile data service provider one. Or can be both. It works on some good days, though and hopefully it works this time because it would sadden me if I have to remember all that I've said and re-type them down.
I hope the end of the tunnel is near! Kind of worried about the mental communication between Kyungsoo and Minseok, though. Cause that would be another point against the two characters. All in all, great chapter as always. Thank you for this update!
Chapter 33: OMG I haven't finished the Inquisition yet ( actually i just arrived at Skyhold but my laptop won't let me play the game sadly...) but i am completely stunned by what you did with Kyungsoo! Am i on the right track though? Kyungsoo saying brethren.... I am so excited!
Anyways, i just found out this fic and i am so happy to see a long Dragon Age au. Also the characters and the plot are really well written. And i am in love with how you put in the fic little easter eggs about the game. Thank you for writing this and FIGHTING!!!
(Ahhh, since i read the whole thing in 3 days, i got used to read chapter after chapter so it will be really hard to wait for the updates now XD )
Chapter 33: I'm keeping up well! Great chapter as always <3 (I really missed reading this story, it's been awhile since I've seen it in my subscriptions haha)
I really liked minseoks and kyungsoos telepathic scene, not really sure why but it stuck out to me.
Chapter 32: I don't know if I've commented on this story before or not, but I want you to know how happy I am to see a Dragon Age au, haha.
Two of my favourite things in one place!
I'm eagerly awaiting the culmination of all the subplots that are winding around, hehe.
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