Chapter 1: i especially love the lines about how love can both be selfish and sellfless-- because in the end sehun was still selfless, in fact hed encouraged baek to go back to yeol if he ever feels like he wants to. and in the end baek was still selfish, because he didnt give himself a chance, only taking himself away when hed forgiven himself, even when sehun had told him to please go on with his life happily.
in the end baek was still selfish. i actually entertained the thought of baek and yeol ending up together now that sehun is gone and jongin is gone and baekyeol are both better people who actually can be together now without cheating. but in the end loneliness still won over baek the first time it did and he went with it. selfish, it!s a selfish action, what he did in the end. perhaps it's because even if this is written in his pov i still dont understand his feelings well or something, but the fact that his life didnt go on the way most things do..... would i have done that if i were his character and felt his feelings? maybe, i dont know. in the end he just couldnt take losing sehun again
tragic, to be honest. theyre together now but baek..
wow what the hell did i just say in this comment
just the same, tho, this was a wonderful sequel. still such an experience. thank you for writing and sharing!!!!!!!!!!! last sequel up nextttt 2/2
Chapter 1: in the end baek was still selfish
how to comment on this. first of all this is a really good sequel to such an emotional fic like 140506 it really is. up until here the emotions still play all throughout he fic and stuff like that, and you know....... how do i say this....... i got what i wanted. i said i wanted baek to suffer longer for hia sins and here he did. he actually really did.
there is no getting past the fact that sehun was still selfless and loving and still the perfect person that baek still doesnt deserve. i love how baek couldnt forgive himself even tho sehun already did. the fact that he lives with his guilt even though he and sehun were finally okay back together makes satisfaction burn in me. about chanyeol, even, i actually love his resolution about how he learned his lesson the hard way and sehun had forgiven him. SEE, SEHUN REALLY IS THE PERFECT GUY. but more than that, im just really like, yah good job park chanyeol, i want you to live with your guilt as well
you know the entire time i knew sehun was dying and yet all he ever asked for baek was for him to be happy even when hes gone, and how he apologizes for having to leave baek again. sehun ha snothing to be sorry for, it isnt like he can control it, but i think that just made everything hurt for baek more 1/2
It is 3AM in my country rn and imbawling my eyes out and sobbing in my bed while cluthing my phone... What a great summer holiday.. And thank you for this amazing onion like fic i think i cried out the pacific.
Chapter 1: writernim
how could you? how could you do this to me?
why did you kill off sehun's character, you made me shed tears at 12 midnight. its so not fair!
i dont support suicide in any way but the way you wrote baekhyun's death was so beautiful.
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