Chapter 109: I have read this over the span of three (or was it four?) days and I really liked it. Although some things were really obvious to me. Was Jae being the tree/butterfly/voice supposed to be a surprise? Because I knew that basically from the get-go. It was really obvious. Also, I wasn't surprised at all when Jae stabbed herself with the dagger. I had literally been waiting for it too happen. I was like "so when is she gonna stab herself with that dagger, 'cause I know it's gonna happen at some point"'chapters ago. :') And when it happened I was tense and emotional but there was also this part of me that was just screaming "FINALLY!"
Anyway, here's some things I didn't really like:
1) The term 'that woman' was really overused. It really started to bug me and it just sounded unnatural that they'd call her that every. single. time.
2) Korean words sprinkled over the story. Yeah, I'm one of those people. I just really dislike it when I see things like wae or jinjja when there's a perfectly usable English translation. Honorifics like hyung or noona I have no problems with, but other than that...
It just makes it harder to read. It ruins the flow of the story and if you don't know a word you can't even use Google translate because it's romanised. Also, it just seems a bit disrespectful..? And really unnecessary.
But yeah! Overall, I really liked this! ^^
Oh! And that breaking of the fourth wall you did with there being no school was great. :')
Chapter 109: So thankful I discovered this story when it was featured. This story gave me all the feels!!! I felt tears trying to escape when realization hit that she was actually in all the boys' memories even if they didn't realize she was the butterfly. (that's so beautiful) So glad Jae gets this beautiful happy ending she deserves <3 thank you for writing such an amazing story!!!
Chapter 109: Okay, i take back what i said. Obviously, i did not read the last chapter wtf... but anyways yeah... thanks for being a tease... whoever you are...
Chapter 108: That was one hell of a rollercoaster ride istg. The way you described your characters, the scene, the emotions, everything was beyond ordinary. This story was beautifully written and I'm glad it was featured! tho the ending was perfect, i was kinda sad how Jae couldn't be with the rest in her original form, but reading the reasons why she couldn't do so makes it understandable i guess. looking forward to more of your works!
Chapter 109: OHMYGOD. It took me a week to finish especially with classes, but I did not expect such an emotional roller coaster ride. I honestly sobbed my heart out when Jae said her goodbyes. I laughed and I cried so much because of this story. YOU did an amazing job, authonim. I approve!! I'm usually a silent reader but all in all, I have fallen in love with your story
Chapter 109: Came across this while browsing the featured section. Sooo glad I did. It is now one of my fave stories. Very well written, great plot, just enough fluff, good action, some interesting plot twists to keep things going, and lots of sass which I love! Def worthy of being featured. The last couple chaps had the waterworks going and that's hard to do too lol.
Chapter 109: The last few chapters had me sobbing like a baby. But the ending.... Made me smile like an idiot. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
This fic deserves its feature, your writing is enticing. A spell almost. The way you weaved the fabric of the story is admirable. Brilliantly done!
Chapter 109: ah you really know who to get my waterworks going, i may say. please also allow me to say that your writing is beautiful and i'm so in love with this. i'm wholeheartedly glad you've gotten featured.
Chapter 31: oh my god i was screaming when jae accidentally step on that stupid fallen branch... and my workmates giving me the weird look because of it. its worth it tho :)
um wow i'm lost for words. i wasn't expecting that ending at all.
at first, when I saw the comments, i was thinking like 'what could they have possibly meant by that?' like did anyone die or did something bad happen? but they said it was a good ending too so i was being very cautious while reading it just so that i wont bawl my eyes out lol.
anyway, i enjoyed reading it i finished it in 2 days xD i'm happy but still frustrate with the ending i'm sure you'll understand why haha.
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