Chapter 3: okay so i cant text you dont have my phone. im glad i read this one and your writing has grown so much! i like the ending and im glad it ened that way. no i didnt cry. you have the stage perfectly prepared for what was going to happen in the future. both characters were well rounded and im impressed that a book inspired you to write your own. even without the name luhan as the male lead, this story stands alone strong in the works of literary fiction. the story isthereality of onesided love to unrequited love turned obsession that ended bittersweet. character development were very good...you were able to show both luhan and jinaes characteristics by just focusing on luhans POV. maybe you can write another story based on jinae perspective on love and obsession.
Chapter 1: Hahah i really love this story.. My english teacher gave us a homework and that is to write a story i got really frustated when i havent start even my name so i wrote this story she wont know anyway hahaha mianhae author nim is that okay??
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